Reviews for Thirty Seconds
2merryann chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
Wow. Jakes life flashing before his eyes. Great writing!
curlybean chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
Excellent story. I wondered what could have been going through Jake's mind during this time, and this just seems true to form. I'm sure Jake has a lot of regrets about his time away from home, but I think he has more than made up for that since returning. Thanks for sharing your story. I hope you write more.