Reviews for Inured
FullMentalPanic chapter 1 . 7/6/2015
I really enjoyed this. You had some great action descriptions in the battle without toning down the brutality and there was this overarching wryness with Sephiroth's awareness of being accused of wasting company resources. The general is definitely good at his job, but you also manage to humanize him as well, showing his lack of social ease, that really fascinating bit where he thinks guilty thoughts but doesn't feel them, and the almost matter of fact way he approaches battle situations. Is Sephiroth killing Yuffie's mom canon? I honestly can't remember. Anywho, I thought this great.
Pied Flycatcher chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
Interesting. I liked the way you characterised Sephiroth especially - how he knows he should feel guilty, but he can't help being dispassionate. The middle battle section really showed that effectively too. It's a bit odd that he calls her Yu Fi though, I don't really get why you did that.