|Reviews for Work in progress|
| blakeaustinpayne2008 chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
this is a good story line i would really like to see it completed!
| thereallegend123 chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
This is a very interesting start. I know that this story is five tears old, but if you could return to it with fresh ideas, I'm sure we'd all appreciate it.
| The Keeper of Worlds chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
Wow, now that is a twist!
| TheFoolishThief chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
Will you continue the story.
| VeeAmAy chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
I love it! Please update soon.
| DemonWolf Alchemist chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
WHY HAVE YOU NOT UPDATED? This chapter looks fantastic, and I want to see what happens next! Please come up with a second chapter!
| thelonechidori chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
awsome story dude! almost cried at the end when timmy just stood there watching... plz update soon! keep up the good work!
| doctor343 chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
please make another chapter the story is great
| Chapitas1991 chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
This story is awesome!
Please review. Pretty Please? I'm begging you!
| darthdragon chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
This is good.
ALL HAIL DARTHDRAGON!
| grazingalpaca chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
okay what the heck did that haveto do with anything? sorry...
| KamikazekaitoFlor-Chan chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
I like this story, please contineue
| badkidoh chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
i think i like it. will there be any romance just asking don't really care if there is.
| MikariStar chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
It looks good so far. I'm curious about where you'll take this story. Update soon!
| Nicky4 chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
This is really good. I hope you continue it.