|Reviews for Indigestion, Expired Milk and Sasuke|
| BethyQuake chapter 1 . 4/11
Wow this story was great! I loved it!
Though, Usuratonkachi actually means "thin hammer" which basically means Useless.
| Alibi Nonsense chapter 1 . 2/3/2015
How could Naruto mistake kissing for nausea! Poor Sasuke!
But lucky Sasuke...
But, y'know... nausea...?
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/16/2014
That was cute.
| FreakyFee94 chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
Hehehehe... Naruto... a totally usuratonkachi :DD
| starlighttauriel chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
This, this- "Naruto's heart hammered wildly against his chest, not just beating like a crazy drum but singing like a goddamn orchestra."
I don't know why I find it so sweet, maybe because its not just something physical but rather, romantic; or something.
| EdwardFish chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
First off, I must say you have one of the greatest Pen Names of all time.
This was an enjoyable fic, well written, funny and really sweet :) Though it was painful to read at times, because I have unappreciated tendency to feel embarrassment for others(this case Sasuke)
| Fellfire chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
Sasuke smirked. "Just so you know, after today there's no way I can stop calling you 'usuratonkachi'."
The kyuubi container sighed heavily. "I understand and I accept my fate."
"And eating before you train…it'll be the death of you."
"Oh I know."
"Sakura and I have warned you many times so it won't be our fault."
"Of course not."
"…You're going to keep doing it, aren't you?"
"Most likely, yes."
"Usuratonkachi," Sasuke shook his head, but the smile that Naruto had been waiting for peeked out.
Omg you remineded agian me why I luv these two! *envelopes them in a bone cracking hug*
| MusicFan Banana chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
Naruto's a moron...
How can he confuse indigestion with a kiss Cx
| hgjasdf chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
I can never imagine sasuke crying o_o but red rimmed eyes yes. And hurt expression yes. And naruto being a doofus idiotic usuratonkachi yes. Heartwarming fic!
| Crazy PurpleSage chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
That was soooo very good. I like not only Naruto's uncertainty, which you portrayed and described and acted out so well, but also his obliviousness. So funny! Who knew kissing could be mistaken for indigestion? lol
I just really like how Naruto was trying to figure out if he liked Sasuke, and the awkwardness, and Naruto's deep thoughts. It made it more realistic than most all SasuNaru oneshots.
| Elanora-Nayru chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
This was so sweet:) And the emotions and anxieties were so realistic! You have no idea how hard it is to find a good realistic story. It was funny in all the right places and serious when it needed to be, you pulled the whole idea of the story off so well. I actually felt really sorry for Sasuke in your story, not so much because Naruto unintensionally rejected him but becasue he liked Naruto SO much and he was just too emotionally retarded to really portray that to him. The ending was sweet, and i am glad you didn't make them go all out pornstar in this like most authors do in their stories, it was just right:) I will have to go through and read the rest of your stories, and if they are anything like the ones i have already read i am sure i will enjoy myself immensely:D
| anOnyme chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
I loved it ! great story ...
| Housenka chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
another fic i absolutely loved! please write more about these two:)
| The Laughing Fool chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
Cute cute cute cute Cute CUte CUTe CUTE!
I love the emotionally stunted Sasuke and Naruto- they are so much fun.
And it's always awesome when Sasuke is the one who likes Naruto first- I love that and this was well written and very entertaining.
Eating before practice will be the death of him.
This was So cute~!
| Deathless Wraith chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
I love how super awkward they are in this, and how their new relationship feels so strange to them. This give-and-take transition is really the only plausible way I feel they could start to date each other. :)