Reviews for Admission
Tyleet27 chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
NICE. Seriously nice. I like all three of them, but especially her reaction to hearing what happened to him. Not really *realizing* it until she's halfway through the accounting and then just sobbing...Pretty spot on, in my opinion. As is her worry over the armor and Tony's complete confidence.
teacrumb chapter 1 . 5/21/2008
Myah! Again with the fantasticness! Seriously write more!
La Flamingo chapter 1 . 5/19/2008
Very intense, short drabbles that cover a lot of serious ground. I've always wondered how a guy like Tony Starks, after essentially causing the unemployment of god knows how many of his employees, wouldn't have SOMEONE try to kill him.

Your style makes the succinctness of each little scene really hit home - even when the subject matter is humorous.

Altogether? I'd love to see more, but if that doesn't happen, this was very well done. Awesome job. :)
Allie chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
please continue but make it into a full length and a romance.
Amber-Jade James chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
In my opinion it was a little hard to follow but i caulk that up to her being emotional and her thoughts going every which way. All and all, a nice storie about what Pepper is thinking.