Reviews for Forever Stained Red
myangelicladyofdarkness chapter 7 . 7/27/2013
noooo not hot fluffy fiery drama!
MCRDanime chapter 16 . 7/26/2011
You should really continue this story it's really good. Please don't forget it. Update soon! And hurry!
xXxDragonxPhoenixXx chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
I love this story, I couldn't stop reading it. I hope you get your inspiration back, LavixAya is greatly missed.
Chibi-Kyuubi-Chan chapter 16 . 1/18/2011

Hopefully, you'll get some inspiration soon!

Keep it up and update soon!
BakaBlack13 chapter 16 . 12/25/2010
Dream of Cream chapter 16 . 8/9/2010
i was going through the archives and saw this then when i FINALLY made it to this ch and FINISHED it i look at the updated date aaaannnndddddd... screamed out in anger because i wished to read more... yeah. YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE! SO FAR THIS IS THE BEST LAVIXOC STORY I'VE READ!
Satou Kimura chapter 16 . 11/6/2009
heehee i just read all 16 chapters, la~

i think the way Lavi and Ayaka met was kinda... awkward. but after the initial weirdness, the story picked up their pace. i think the feelings for lavi seemed to come to suddenly. maybe because of the numerous time-skips.

i think the amount of time-skips were not reli needed, but it gets the story on track quickly. I would comment tht the change in lavi's attitude is way too sudden; considering the amount tht the bookman said (not a lot) and the amount of mental struggle with deak. i think you could slow down a bit and let the reader absord the story. everything seems to be going to fast. though the amnesia was at a good pace, cuz we dont reli want to c ayaka not remember lavi for too long. but again, the mental struggle was way on the low side. the moment before she remembers lavi could be much better if more thoughts and previous memories rushed into her mind, not only images, but it could also include scent and stuff.

anyway, great story ur building on!

keep writing and i'll review!

OCLover89 chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
Please update!

i read this on adultfanfiction and i really want to read the rest of the story... so please update, i'll give you a cookie if you do w
Kuro Neko to Kuro Bara chapter 16 . 10/7/2009
This one too! I didn't even notice I was on chapter 16 until I came to the end of the chapter!
xXKaira-HimeXx chapter 16 . 4/2/2009
Awsome, update soon!
Azn Bey chapter 16 . 2/16/2009
oh my god! this part was so sad!


i just got my internet working recently and the i read this.

its so sad!

please continue!

its getting suspencful!
dracosangel337 chapter 16 . 1/1/2009
OMG IVE BEEN WAITING 4EVA! wat happened? well at least u didnt abandon it. n e ways i feel bad 4 Aya stupid lavi! n e wayz HAPPY NEW YEAR!
Lala-tan chapter 16 . 12/31/2008
Aw... The conflicts between being a human and a bookman... It's just so conflicting... Ah~ Makes the drama all the more exciting~ -


DreamWalker18 chapter 16 . 12/30/2008
AW! poor lavi-chan! -sniffle- i'm not gonna like kill u tho lol even i luv Lavi hehe! i honestly luv this twist in the story! hehe awesome job, nya!

IHasNoLife chapter 16 . 12/30/2008
DAMN IT LAVI! You made Aya CRY! As painful as this chapter was, GREAT JOB! I've been waiting with anticipation for this chapter and I will continue to expect more amazing chapters from you. I've said it before and I'll say it again, you write the best LavixOC pairing fanfic EVER! Thank you SO much for sticking with it. Please update again soon! _
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