|Reviews for Invisible|
| fay208 chapter 6 . 5/20/2011
its too scary to rated as M? you should change it to T at least. good idea of story. but it happens too rush and painly smoothly. for me I thought something fishy is going on at first. oh well.
| Pechay chapter 6 . 1/31/2011
There arent any lemons how can it be rated M?
| MidnightRosebud chapter 6 . 1/20/2011
Cute. Definitely wish it had more depth to the story, but it was a good, simple, fast read.
| pikachu2510 chapter 6 . 10/30/2010
This story was interesting, buh in the epilogue it seemed like u rushed the part after Sakura told Syaoran she liked him 2... I really liked the story buh I think that, that was sucha short time 2 fall in love w/ each other... even tho they said they like each other, anyways I think this story is great, thanks 4 writin it )
| DetectiveConanFan13 chapter 3 . 2/17/2010
"Damn ghost. First she gets me lost. Now she’s committed to making me wet myself."
I wish I could have laughed at that. I am in a library though. No laughing out loud. So... *Laughs* Ha library! I beat you! ... I am such a nerd... Oh well! .
Anyways, I like this so far and I really want to read more right now... So I will!
Thanks for the story and I am going to go read more now! .
| Kirhava chapter 6 . 1/25/2010
I loved your story! It was a little bit tragic, tough.
| Kawaii Tenshi no Hikari chapter 6 . 10/6/2009
Awesome story. It may be short, but it has all those elements that make up a good story. It was just too bad that Touya had to go like that sniff. While I knew he most likely hadn't run away, I was hoping he had.
| Musette Fujiwara chapter 6 . 7/15/2009
it was utterly cute how he went and told her he likes her... so cute...
| poems2songs chapter 6 . 6/24/2009
wonderful story... really liked it... nice happy ending... good job... great work!
| xSapphirexRosesxFanx chapter 6 . 6/17/2009
| xSkull.CanDiiee.Bitesx chapter 6 . 6/17/2009
Awe! Cute! 3 And they lived happily ever after xD Lol xD Awesome fic Faerie!
| GinaLovesZero chapter 6 . 6/17/2009
Aw, I'm glad she woke up! And they like eachother too! Too bad we didn't get a kiss.
Oh well, still loved it though!
| Emilinia-sama chapter 6 . 6/17/2009
hooray! you finally finished! it was really good! thanks for taking time away from Dofus to update for us!
can't wait to see what else you'll be writing! bye
| AngelEmCuti chapter 6 . 6/17/2009
Aw kawaii fic! you did a great job, i enjoyed it very much!_
| vinh chapter 6 . 6/17/2009
Yay! an ending. I glad she finally got a happy ending.