Reviews for electric top tango
0110111001101111 chapter 1 . 6/1/2008
So cute. Fuck. ;A;
lauren lachrymose chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
YOU ARE FABULOUS & I LOVE YOU. BEST WIFE EVAR, IMO.

This is so cute and romantic and whimsical and like wow, I wish I was Olette right about now. and - and you mentioned Bogie(!) & I'm totally watching 'Sabrina' at the moment, so that made me giggle just a bit.

aslkhf;ladjasda.
silver moon droplet chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
m...

i dun like kairiolette mm.

BUT.

I TOTALLY DIGGED THIS.

[:
tReZUP8staFu chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
I like this just how it is. The writing style and structure is enticing, the wording is perfect, and the tone is not only sweet but genuine. The sparse imagery just means that what actually is portrayed is that much more vivid. Great job, and good luck!
xxlovelycollision chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
OH DON'T BE THAT WAY :)

It's not crappy, just different and different

is good. You made the pairing work. Most people

probably would have thrown a bunch of yada yada

crap in there, but the way you described Kairi

and Olette's relationship was honest and sweet.

AND THERE'S A BABY REPLIKU!

Good luck and thanks for the entry :D
lol chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
this is really good.