Reviews for Evening Falls
Musikrulesok chapter 25 . 6/18/2013
WOW! I've been so absorbed into the story that I forgot to review! Sorry about that! But this really is a fantastic story, one of the best fan fics I've ever read, I almost missed a day of school I was so desperate to find out what happened next! Please, please, please update soon I don't think I can last much longer :P Like I said this is a great story and you have a amazing talent!
Doveflight chapter 2 . 4/7/2013
Great story! I can't/can belive she actually died! It was good though. I wonder if you have a sneak peak of her family's pov and how they reacted? *goes to read more*
Doveflight chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
That part when he said i'm know your there scared me half to death and made me look behind me xD! Really good so far! Much better written than your other fic but that one was good too. I can't wait to read more
Haruchan-chan chapter 25 . 4/5/2013
This i such a cool story. Please update soon.
I Am Switzerland101 chapter 25 . 4/3/2013
awww man i was actually getting pretty into this story and then i saw it hasnt been updated for a year sad faaaace.

hopefully one day we'll get to see it all work out
Guest chapter 25 . 3/21/2013
Nooooo! You can't leave me hanging! Please write the next chapter, even if it is a little late! Please? This and Exraordinary are my favourite Fanfictions. Ever! Please, please, please write the next chapter? (I reaallly wanna read the Tandy VS Elisa face off!)
P.S: Is it E-lee-sa or El-i-sa? (Like Eliza) ? Xxxxxxx
susannahblack19 chapter 25 . 1/21/2013
omg this is so good! please update!
Andy Elladora Black chapter 25 . 12/25/2012
I love this story! So heartbreaking in the beginning too. Please update soon. I'm a new reader so I don't really know your updating schedule.
Lumy-san chapter 25 . 11/15/2012
This is a very good story! You do a very good job of keeping everyone in character. I really like how you made Bella and Edward's relationship even stronger than if was in the books too. Elisa is an amazing OC as well! I can't wait for the next chapter.
Prevouslyknownasxocrazililkelo chapter 25 . 9/17/2012
Yay, I'm so glad your containing this epically amazing story! I have my own theory about how Alice and Elisa is connected but i'm probably wrong. I’ve seen its been a couple of months since you last updated are you still working on the story or is it on hiatus again? I also think you handle the senstive subject with Jimmy really well. Poor Elisa.
Guest chapter 25 . 9/15/2012
i'm not nervous about the next chapter - except about when i get to read it.
Anna chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
Its a wonderful character that youve created. I cant wait for the story to continue now that the whole family is gathered. Also, its nice to see Jaspers softer side with Elisa.

Caelifer chapter 25 . 8/22/2012
I was I could give you some helpful constructive criticism, the that is seriously not my forte. What I can tell you though is Elisa is a good OC. She is a mary-sue and she faces problems any teenaged girl her age could encounter (like what happened with Jimmy;such an unexpected twist by the way). I like the general plot of this story too. Not one of those typical 'girl get sent into a fandom and every male character falls in love with them.' So please update, I'm eager to read more!

Jacki Thompson chapter 25 . 8/7/2012
Loved the story! You did a terrific job! So, well, I can't wait to see what happens next!
Helena chapter 25 . 6/14/2012
I have been following this story for a while, and was I surprised to find three updates! Thanks for the fodder, these were great. You have such a way of breathing life into the rather two-dimensional characters Meyer gave us. The twist about Jimmy was heartbreaking, but I am glad Elisa is mature enough to realize she has a great friend, if never a boyfriend.

Alice! Bella! Edward! Yaaaay! Happy family, but what is to come?

This chapter was perfect. Thank you! :)
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