|Reviews for Evening Falls|
| persephonesfolly chapter 23 . 4/11/2012
Exceptional chapter! It had all the emotional drama anyone could wish. Elisa's resemblance to Bella came through so very clearly. Both had low self-esteem and wondered what the Cullens could possibly see in them, even though the readers (and the Cullens) love them for who they are. Like most teens, Elisa tends to wallow a bit in self pity and wonder if anyone will ever truly care for her once they get to know her.
Alice's words about teenaged boys' maturity level made me laugh. So true! And Rosalie and Emmett's over protectiveness as they agree to let Elisa go out on a shopping date added a touch of humor that was a nice contrast to all the intense emotional conflict between Alice, Rosalie, Jasper, and Emmett. I don't blame Elisa a bit for yelling at them to stop and retreating to her bedroom.
Sebastian continues to be problematic, and I can't wait to see how he'll figure in future chapters. I'm so glad you're posting again!
| Charisasori chapter 23 . 4/11/2012
*stares* Seriously...did you just...update?
...Oh my. I'm so surprised. I kind of gave up on this story after a while, but I am so happy to be proved wrong! I loved this chapter! The suspense about Sebastian is starting to get to me, though. I really would love to know more about him. Aside from that, I really hope that the situation with Alice gets sorted out soon. Poor Alice and Jasper. :-(
Anyways, I hope that your next update will come sooner, it'd be awfully hard to wait that long, especially with all this Sebastian/Secrets/Bella-as-a-newborn/Alice-gone-missing thing you have going on. Please, please, please update as soon as you can! (Sorry, I don't mean to be obnoxious, but...this is a great story with a really engaging plot. Literally can't get enough of it.)
Anyway, a hundred praises on the fantastic chapter and double the number on pleads for the next update! :-)
| Panda Bandit chapter 22 . 4/4/2012
WHAT HAPPENED! your not writing the story no more? you have to continue!
| ComicXArena chapter 22 . 3/8/2012
OMG! Lying is so much more exciting than any action scene XD. I LOVE this chapt
| Link's Rose chapter 22 . 2/3/2012
GAH You're tying my romance brain-connections into knots! okay, that really sucked, but still, they were SO CLOSE to having a first kiss!
| Link's Rose chapter 2 . 2/1/2012
Holy chocolate starfish these chapters are long! dont even ask, look up the gag-reel for season 2 of smallville, watch the whole thing, and you'll see who I got that from if you wanna know
| Charisasori chapter 22 . 1/17/2012
Wow! This story was great! I can't help but feel extremely put out that you ended the story on such a cliff-hanger, though. On another note, however, I'm extremely intrigued with Sebastian. I'll admit that I find him rather interesting and charming; I can't wait to see what role he's going to play in Elisa's life. I'm looking forward to what you're going to do with him as a character and just what he meant when he said "Your secret is safe with me." I'm also curious to find out about his gift. He seems like an interesting character!
| AngelofMusic chapter 22 . 12/6/2011
Please, Please update this soon
| Almadynis Rayne chapter 22 . 11/27/2011
Really, really, really, really hope to ready more soon!
| Sorcha111 chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
Great story, you really managed to keep the canon characters true to the book. Is there any chance that you're still updating this?
| Theta-McBride chapter 22 . 9/15/2011
Ooooooohh, something's gonna happennnnn. The next chapter is going to be amazing, just like this one. And all the others were awesome too.
| Nurseratchet chapter 22 . 9/13/2011
I love this story! Is Elisa going to get together with the kid from school or is Sebastian going to be the one? Update soon please!
| Lady Oblivious chapter 22 . 8/11/2011
Please update soon! Ugh, someone always has to ruin the happy day, don't they? I wonder if Elisa will tell them about what happened...Lady O.
| Helpful Hinter chapter 22 . 8/3/2011
So... it has been a year today. Just so you know. This story is excellent, and I would sure love to read more! I know life is really hectic and having a family and career on top of that is near impossible.
that being said, Elisa is my favorite OC! She actually has depth, and I love love love her interactions with the Cullens. Also- great plot, yes yes!
So yeah. Not the most helpful review, but I do hope this story isn't lost to cyberworld! :(
| TurningANewPage chapter 22 . 7/6/2011
My only hope is that my review will suddenly remind you how great this story of your is, and how you've merely forgotten to update in this past year. I can only hope this is true. Because this is an amazing story. REALLY amazing. Please, if you are reading this and you don't plan to update ever again, at least post an AN or something to inform readers of the Hiatus. I mean, it's so incredibly disappointing when you are reading a great story, and it suddenly stops. Please.
Thanks for your amazing stories. :)