|Reviews for Evening Falls|
| Aubrey Woods chapter 2 . 5/13/2008
I liked this chapter very much. I thought it's going to be confusing with all that point of views, but it wasn't.
And I'm so sad because of Elisa. I can't believe she's dead.
I wonder what will happen next. Keep writing, because you're doing great job.
| Sabs7 chapter 2 . 5/12/2008
Well done...It was tense but very well done... So... Is Jacob going to imprint on her? It might be kind of expected but I think it would be great! Then she could go live on the Reservation and Rosalie could shut up for 10 minutes (maybe). : )
| Alde chapter 2 . 5/12/2008
You have no idea how happy it made me to see that you had continued on Elisa's story! Totally made my day! And I must say, I really like the direction you have chosen, I think it makes everything so much more realistic!
It's so sad that Elisa's dead (or is she?) when her relationship with her father had finally started improving, but I think, in the end, it only adds to the storyline.
You handle the different POV's very well, and I'm glad to see that Bella's is in there aswell.
I like how you wrote Elisa's feelings when she found herself in the 'Twilight- world' again. You keep building her character, and she's becoming more and more "real" to me(something like that, you know what I mean:P). And the end of this chapter was so beautiful and sad, it made me cry!
I'm really sorry for not reviewing sooner! Every time I've tried to click the review- button, the entire site has stopped functioning and my computer has shut down. Extremely annoying! But anyway, keep writing) You do a great job!
| The Perfect Spell chapter 2 . 5/12/2008
Bite her when she's 17! :D:D
| doreansmomma chapter 2 . 5/11/2008
Oh what a chapter! On the emotions of Elisa, Rosalie, Edward & Bella! WOW! That last line got me teary-eyed. And now the werewolves' tension is coming in the mix of it all.
Fav Lines: What's happened is not fair. Death never is. It doesn't care if you're young, if you've cheated it before, if you don't deserve it, if it will destroy those you love. It just comes, and it takes you and there is no amount of tears or pity that can change that. You have to face it, and accept it.
| UberWacky chapter 2 . 5/11/2008
Another amazing chapter. I hope Elisa becomes a vampire. It would be way too cliche if she as Jacob's imprint.
| Sincrely ME chapter 2 . 5/11/2008
I am SOO glad that you finally made this sequal! It is absolutely enthralling! I get so caught up in it it's like my own little world here on Earth just disappears! Keep it up!
| afamiliarsmile chapter 2 . 5/11/2008
Oh my I don't even think I can try and assume what might happen. This is amazing so far and it's only the second chapter. Update soon please!
| Slaifer chapter 2 . 5/11/2008
I don't have much time to write something. So I'll tell you that, as always, the chapter has been amazing.
Hope you can update soon!
| DuchessMiMaAeKo chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
oh my gosh! hurry! Please UPDATE! oh my gosh, I'm hyperventilating...
| UberWacky chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
Pure brilliance. Your story and "The Puppet Master"(which I suggest you read. Its amazing)are the only ones that leave me speechless. And thank god you write long chapters and you update quickly. I hope Elisa will see the Cullen's next chapter!
| Aubrey Woods chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
Wonderful. Finally there's sequel. I couldn't wait for it. I think that Elisa has some bad luck
| The Perfect Spell chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
More please! I just finished reading your previous story and couldn't wait for this sequel
Somehow I wish Scott will kill Elisa so she would be dumped into twilight again with the Cullens :D I don't think that would happen, but maybe him knocking her out again, like the car did?
| Queen of the Unknown chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
Yay for updates! I loved the writing in the last part. Elisa's great, as usual.
| doreansmomma chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
Ava, you've outdone yourself! I kinda figured the time-frame thing was for a reason as I read on.
I LOVE that Elisa and her dad had that talk and that he has made some excellent changes...and that her mom is pregnant!
Now, what are the Cullens going to do with Mr. Giggles?
Fav lines: Dad shook his head. He looked completely miserable now but I couldn't stop staring. I had never heard any of this before and it was fascinating. "Anyway, when we almost lost you, it made me face up to a lot of things. I couldn't stand the idea that you could have died never knowing how much I love you, how proud I am to have you for a daughter. I don't want things to be like that anymore."