Reviews for Marriage laws
jumping-jo chapter 9 . 5/17/2008
lucius is a sadistic bitch isn't he poor hermione and harry well least severus is sort of understanding
jadedragon36 chapter 9 . 5/17/2008
Ok now you are frustrating me the chapters are too short and you leave me wanting more... glad you took the reviews to heart... can't wait for next chapter
Sarahamanda Klaine chapter 9 . 5/17/2008
I like this chapter. It is agood chapter. please update soon.
Murgy31 chapter 9 . 5/17/2008
Great chapter! I can't wait to see if the potion works. Please update soon!
sernity1806 chapter 8 . 5/16/2008
better be. I hope that this will work out in the end.
jadedragon36 chapter 8 . 5/16/2008
I'm glad that Lucius has gone away for a little while giving Hermione time... Like that Draco is the one who is helping both Harry and Hermione, but it is good that Katie is standing up to Snape. The empathy potion is a good idea... can't wait to see the result
AJ Elfhawk chapter 8 . 5/16/2008
So I thought this was just going to be really fun, instead it turns out to be rather dark and really hot!

I love it, this is so awesome... more snarry please! :) lots of angst and 'relations', cos you do it really well!

please please please update as soon as you can! im in love with the story now lol :)

Cheers, AJ x
Midnight Lilly chapter 8 . 5/16/2008
I would use a potion that would make them feel effects for weeks.
AJ Elfhawk chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
I've just kept shouting out 'Oh My God', in bouts of astonished and delighted laughter!

I haven't even finished chapter one here, or read other reviews, but this is so damn funny in the best possible way! It's absolutely fantastic! :D

Will review again later when I've kept reading properly, but Harry's reactions here are just absolutely classic, and it just gets better and better...

Excellent job :) AJ x
Deliliah and Nathan chapter 8 . 5/16/2008
Interesting twist ona bond story. Update soon please.
vanessa riddle chapter 8 . 5/16/2008
AngelFirePhoenix chapter 8 . 5/16/2008
At this point I can't see how you can still class this as a Romance. As a suvivor of Sexual Assualt and Sexual Abuse I can say that I will NEVER, NEVER trust the person(s) who abused/asaulted me enough to have a romance/romantic relationship with them. Although I was not trapped in a relationship with one of them, I am related to the other and am torn because that person died - I'm greatful that they died because I don't have to deal with that person, but feel awful at the loss to my family and the shortness of the life they lived. I really can't see how Harry & Hermione will be able to totally recover from these traumas since they are forced to remain in the relationships, but I plan on sticking with the story as I can't bear to leave them in such pain.
esined0319 chapter 8 . 5/16/2008
I was ready to give this story up as it is quite brutal and I do believe that neither Harry nor Hermione would be so wimpy. Hermione would have been smart enough to go to another school like Beaubatons or go and find her parents. Harry too, would have helped her along with Ron, and also would have thrown his mother in Snape's face telling him that she would be horrified by his behavior and that she was right to break off their friendship. That would have hurt Snape to the core. I also think Dumbledore could have done more. So I am going to continue to follow the story since you said things will be getting better and I did like Draco trying to help, even though he is not my favorite character.
Sarahamanda Klaine chapter 8 . 5/16/2008
I like this chapter. It is agood chapter. Please update soon.
dino6 chapter 8 . 5/16/2008
Wow an early update! I hope Draco's plan works for both of them.
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