|Reviews for Coming Home|
| Runawynd chapter 1 . 9/4/2014
Aww I thought this was so cute! 3 Great work, thanks for the read!
| blindes-einhorrn chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
that was endearing.
| Jaceee chapter 1 . 10/29/2008
This is good, but I think there's only one problem with it otherwise...
the paragraphing is a little clumped together. Maybe try spacing it out a little more in the future so it doesn't look so 'brick-wall-ish'?
But good job, anyway.
| Mini Nephthys chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
Already read this at LJ, but this is fantastic. You definitely have a way with imagery, and I *love* the paragraph about Tibarn's favorite foods. Fantastic work.