Reviews for Dance With Me
Browneyedbella347 chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
OH MY GOD! THAT WAS SO CUTE! Please tell me that you'll finish this story, even after you've won the contest. :) Because you WILL win the contest with this story. I absolutley LOVED it! Thank you for writing this! I really really hope that you write another chapter. :)


Kuroi Garyuu chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
Leave it to Bella to get sick on her wedding day! :)
xXxElianexXx chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
Aww so cute. Brilliant, in-character writing x
OnlyinFiction chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
Awh so sweet and oh look at the time. 1:20am hmm i should go to sleep now... :) anyways great work, very nice.
xxeclipsexx chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
aww, tht was sweet! great job! ]
HermioneGranger1960 chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
I love it! Especially the end! It was so cute!
Oxygen.and.Cucumber chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
Great oneshot! What were the rules for the contest?
Eve Royal chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
Aw... That was so sweet... I'm in love!

I loved Edward in this. He was perfect. And Bella was wonderful sick.

Imhereforever chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
This was beautiful. I loved it, great job :D


Livy Alice chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
Wow. The feeling I got towards the end... just wow. It felt so cute and sweet that I had one of those stupid smiles on my face the whole time (well, at the end). The kind of smiles people give you funny looks for because they are almost impossible to wipe off.

That was very good.
edwardcullansbuffy chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
i liked it it was very well written! good luck in the contest
his babi seal chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
so sweet! i hope you win the contest! and total bella luck there, getting sick on your wedding day.
stare at string chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
Aww, that's so cute! But they'll probably be pretty embarassed when their doctor comes in...
amy chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
aww! this is such a sweet story! i love all ur stories...they never cease to amaze me that they can be so good! ur awesome! keep up the great work!
Beatlemaniac1 chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
That was just adorable! Don't worry, not pointless fluff. Just fluff :)
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