Reviews for Pieces Of Me
sherabo chapter 7 . 5/20/2008
confession time, you are really a part time doctor, posing as a fan fiction writer. I expected his death, but the writing was very real and very moving. Great Work...
sherabo chapter 6 . 5/16/2008
Wow can he really handle the fact he killed his own father, even if he is a bastard. Wow, even though it was a bit hard to read, JM your telling of the abuse was flawless. I felt as though I was write in the room and that was painful. You take your readers to the moment and pull us in. Great work
sherabo chapter 5 . 5/16/2008
Joey I'm pulling for you. Gre/Micheal I understand, but we gotta work with this. Oh so intense...
sherabo chapter 4 . 5/16/2008
This is so sad, I want to cry. All of these personalites protecting his fragile soul. You amaze me with your talent Journey Maker.
sherabo chapter 2 . 5/15/2008
Really scarcy. When that first personality appeared the hairs on my neck stood up. Great story.
TheFemalePharaoh chapter 7 . 5/14/2008
OMG!

I HOPE THAT SICK SOB IS ROASTING IN HELL!

I am So glad that everything turned out alright in the end for my puppy!

WONDERFUL...AS ALWAYS!
TheFemalePharaoh chapter 6 . 5/14/2008
Wow...Michael is trying to help Jou, I see?

I guess the ones that try to shield us from the info we need to know are the ones that are doing us the most harm.

READING ON...
TheFemalePharaoh chapter 5 . 5/14/2008
Poor Jou! I really feel for him in this one. I HOPE THAT BASTARD IS BURNING IN HELL!

Reading on...
dragonlady222 chapter 7 . 5/14/2008
Nice ending. I'm glad they killed that bastard. It wasn't enough punishment so hopefully, he is roasting in hell.
dragonlady222 chapter 6 . 5/13/2008
I hope they tell him. This will be hard on all of them.
dragonlady222 chapter 5 . 5/13/2008
Poor joey. No child should ever have to go through things like that.
dragonlady222 chapter 4 . 5/12/2008
Poor Joey. I hope he can really help him.
TheFemalePharaoh chapter 4 . 5/12/2008
OMG! OMG! OMG!

POOR JOU!

DAMN HIS BASTARD OF A FATHER ALL THE WAY TO HELL!

I will pray that he be alright again adn can be able to lead the kind of life that he is meant to love...one of pure happiness...or as close as he can get to it!

PLEASE CONTINUE!
TheFemalePharaoh chapter 3 . 5/11/2008
I really feel so terrible for Jou. I wonder of this Michael personality could shed some light on this matter.

PLEASE CONTINUE!
TheFemalePharaoh chapter 2 . 5/11/2008
HIS DAD NEEDS TO BURN IN HELL!

Sorry...

Poor Jou! My heart bleeds for him in a major way,

READING ON...
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