|Reviews for Wit's End|
| scifipony chapter 1 . 6/30
I first read this fic back in 2016 and it has held a special place in my bookmarks tab ever since. I can't even begin to describe how much this story just hits every detail so perfect. You have everyone's voices exactly right, and I can easily hear the characters saying these lines in my head. I love how the suspense builds so well from one loop to the next until hitting the breaking point. Your way of writing Rodney is amazing and you just do such a fantastic job capturing all the things that make him such a wonderful character. You somehow manage to balance the comedic elements of the story (Rodney's banter with both John and the villain makes me laugh out loud every single time) with the more serious aspects of what is happening and the trauma Rodney is having to experience in repetitive cycles. John's concern for Rodney here and the way he handles the situation, and his automatic trust in his best friend, it's all just so good. I seriously can't put into words everything I love about this fic. It's so incredible and so well written. Thank you for sharing this story!
| Annon 5yr ago chapter 6 . 2/4/2021
At least five years ago, I read this on FF. It has stayed with me.
Lupin _17 minutes_ Thyme, miss-naming each other, Rodney losing grip because of deaths, _"Danvers"_, with Sheppard portrayed so well through fractured perception... and finally a healing resolution back on Atlantis.
So. Much. Tension. So creatively done. I've never read anything that has such a short time loop, and you did it so excellently!
Thank you for writing this, and sharing it with us!
| sissel snape chapter 1 . 8/20/2020
This fanfiction is also great! I love it how you write so in-character Sheppard and McKay. And I would be grateful for permission to translate this one into Polish (as "The Revenge of the Discs" is already translated) :)
| Half Alien chapter 6 . 9/23/2018
Ok, warning to future readers. This story is very well written. The plot is good. The characters are spot on. That said, by the time I got to the end I was so annoyed and p'd off, I wanted to smack the author. The saying, The definition of insanity is doing the same thing over and over again and expecting a different response, applies to this story more than anything else I can think of. Seriously, readers be ware.
| imperfect-lover chapter 1 . 1/14/2017
This story was awesome! I've been out of the fandom for a while and I'm just getting back in. I'm slowly making my way through all of your Stargate stories lol I LOVE your writing and your characterization is on point! Thanks for sharing your amazing stories with us! )
| Guest chapter 6 . 11/8/2016
| Shiori Dorima chapter 6 . 10/6/2016
I'm not sure if I've reviewed this before or not, but oh well.
This is seriously one of the best fanfics I've read. I've now read it twice and loved it both times. The writing is seamless and consistent with very few grammatical errors, the plot is amazing, and the characters were spot on. I love love love this so much. Rodney was perfect and his reactions felt real and heartbreakingly accurate. I was right there with him the whole time, and that is truly the make lol of amazing piece of writing.
And the quotes! Holy cow I had to save a few they were so damn good.
"You have a very bizarre love/hate relationship with whales, you know that?"
XD I nearly died reading this scene!
| MadisonAgain chapter 6 . 8/17/2016
I really love this story!
| ColorsOfTheWind944 chapter 1 . 5/16/2016
I stayed up way too late reading your story! I just couldn't stop. I had to know what happened next.
| ColorsOfTheWind944 chapter 6 . 5/16/2016
This is such a great story! I love your characterization of Rodney and how he handles the whole situation. John's support and worry for Rodney was fantastic. I love getting to see the two of them interact and help one another through a difficult period.
| Patupi chapter 6 . 1/5/2016
That was incredibly well done, beautiful rendition of the characters and very good flow of the tale. Bravo! I generally hate time travel episodes, but curiously Groundhog Day and that time loop episode of SG-1 I liked. This too now. Good job!
| owtena chapter 6 . 10/2/2015
WOW! It's October, 2015 and I just now discovered this interesting story :)
I love episodes about time loops in TV shows and this story was interesting to read ;)
| Vampy chapter 6 . 3/18/2015
This story... i wasnt able to finish reading it before work and it was absolute torture! Rodney just discovered lupin's secret and was about to throttle him. Damn my work! But i finished it. And it was awesome! I only hoped it was longer... keep writing! Its addictive to read! ;) V.
| mkoepp63026 chapter 6 . 3/5/2015
Really really good in depth look at Rodney. Excellent story
| Ardeliah chapter 6 . 8/28/2014
Yay! I love time loopy stories! And lots and lots of Rodney!