Reviews for His Voice
Zoe58 chapter 2 . 5/16/2008
Great new chapter, looking forward to the next one. Why is Bella there? How did Edward get her?
PinkSlytherin chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
so he is a vampire. right? are the cullens in the story?
MJ 82 chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
I honestly don't know why but...I really enjoyed reading your first chapter. Perhaps it is because Edward's playing the bad guy. I like it and I really want you to continue...
alittlebitwarped chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
This sort of reminds me of Beauty and the Beast.
SexyCullenLove chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
i'm a little confused right now but its still good(
Marshi chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
ha-hah. I always knew edward was this obsessive!
Mrs. Quincy chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
Post More soon!
tonkatruckss chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
edward doesnt have fangs
it's betty girl chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
this is interesting. I really want to read more and find out why Edward is holding bella against her will.

nice work, looking forward to the next chapter.

xx
Zoe58 chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
Looks really really good and an original story line please update soon.
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