|Reviews for What Lies Beneath|
| LeftGirl chapter 6 . 10/16/2013
guess you're not writing anymore.. too bad really loved this heartbreaking story! :)
| Guest chapter 6 . 6/20/2013
Dios cuando vas a a continuar? por favor !
| Oakleh chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
Heyyyy you haven't updated this in a long time... But you really should! This is great!
| Arihimew chapter 6 . 9/9/2012
I know you haven't updated this fabulous story for 4 years now, but I really really wish you could update this eventually. I hope you haven't lost your interest on this pairing either; you are a great writer and I really want to read more of your writing about pepper and tony.
there are plenty of great unfinished stories I've read before, but this one definitely makes one of them, if not the the best three.
The whole plot IMO is very different in an awesome way, since not many fic shows how Tony can act rather harsh to pepper. and you successfully makes him looks more human that way.
awesome awesome awesome.
so please please update this. I'm really waiting ;)
| WolfDarkfur chapter 6 . 8/23/2012
It was getting better and better, i even cried. And then it stops! WHY?
| lizb1813 chapter 6 . 6/13/2012
Wow... this is how, if IM happened in real life, I would expect it to turn out. Excellent writing; you paint a vivid picture of the 'hole' Tony has dug himself into. I hope you come back to this writing, even though it's been 4 years!
| KeitorinNara chapter 6 . 5/15/2012
Why have you abandoned this story? I love it!
| Saint Ginger chapter 5 . 1/28/2012
Please update more
| violingal2 chapter 6 . 11/19/2011
This is sooooooo good! It's been like 3 years but are you ever going to finish this story? I love it so much thank you for writing :)
| bbennett chapter 6 . 9/15/2011
This was fascinating - what a shame you didn't have the chance to finish it!
| bbennett chapter 3 . 9/15/2011
"Hey, what could possibly go wrong?"
"You know, every time someone says that, somewhere an idiot dies."
Fabulous dialog in this chapter. :)
| bbennett chapter 2 . 9/15/2011
You know, I could really picture early morning at a 24 hour Walmart. Nicely written. :)
| StarkObsessed chapter 5 . 3/2/2011
Oh please keep writing! I wanna know what fury has for tony and he cant let pepper leave! Tony has to change and meet his past or whatever. Loved these 6 chaps. Read em 13 times :)
| StarkObsessed chapter 6 . 7/20/2010
I LOVE THIS STORY! This fanfic has been bar far my favorite of the IronMan subject. And I have read over 750,000 words of this stuff. Please continue this story. Ill be backing you the whole way! Love this fic and keep up the good work my friend!
| Quicksilvermad chapter 6 . 5/26/2010
MY HEART HURTS READING THIS.
Still! Damn, you're good.