Reviews for Of the Species
Harlequin Jade chapter 9 . 8/30/2008
Yeah, Norman should have died in the fight... I wonder what the police are gonna say...
firedraygon chapter 9 . 8/30/2008
Aw, there little pseudo-confessions are so sweet. I like how they're getting everything out in the open, how Harry's scared of being alone and how Peter doesn't mind sticking around. Makes things less angsty for the future, haha. Great chapter. Not really looking forward to what Norman's spun for the police...

~fd97
Temporary-Account chapter 8 . 8/18/2008
"And somewhere, beneath it all, there was a college kid who missed his only friend but found with no small measure of despair that their friendship had become distressingly tangled."

I love this line. It just made my heart ache, and I do believe that people too often forget that, as you say, beneath it all, they really are ust kids trying to cope in extraordinary circumstances.
Harlequin Jade chapter 8 . 8/11/2008
Ah! They escaped! But what the heck is gonna happen to Norman? Does Peter expect him to just stay in jail? I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Viviane Renard chapter 8 . 8/11/2008
Things are looking up for Peter and Harry right now, but I don't know if that will last for long. Norman is one creepy, persistent guy...

I like how you show that morality isn't a bunch of black and white options, but a whole smear of grays. Peter really had to think about how he was going to act, and of the consequences of those actions. Good chapter!
Emeralden Rapley chapter 8 . 8/11/2008
yay for the new chapter i likey. it ist awesome. ahahahaha i said ist.
Emeralden Rapley chapter 7 . 8/4/2008
aw that was so cute. you gotta update soon. sorry i haven't been reviewing. it's just i was busy and i didn't have time to read the newer chapter's and such. but i love it and where it is going. that and i love it i mean it may be a sad ending but hey it is excellent.
firedraygon chapter 7 . 8/3/2008
Uh oh, of course it wouldn't be that easy. I'm glad Peter finally got to Harry and reassured him though. All the angst was getting a bit crazy, haha.

And about Harry thinking Peter's his only companion - couldn't he ask his dear old dad to make him one?

Ugh, Norman LEERING. So creepy. Please write more soon!

~fd97
Harlequin Jade chapter 7 . 8/3/2008
Ah! Thats not good... not good at all... I can't wait to read more! Keep up the good work.
PrincessofTennis05 chapter 5 . 8/3/2008
NO! Don't stop there. I was just getting into it. I've been patiently waiting for this update and now that it's here it ended way to quickly. Oh well. I shall persevere.
XxXShadowXofxaXSoulXxX chapter 6 . 7/31/2008
Please update! I am totally in-love with this story. Its unique and wonderfully well written! Great Job!
MissCharmander chapter 6 . 6/29/2008
Holy crap...

Wow, I've never been so interested in a story like this! You connected everything so well, I'm very impressed! I swear, if you turned this into a novel, I'd buy it :D But yeah...Random instinct-sex? Very nice. I like that you made it only ON spider instinct rather than love..I adore writers who do that :]

Keep going!
Harlequin Jade chapter 6 . 6/20/2008
This just keeps getting more interesting... I like it!
firedraygon chapter 6 . 6/20/2008
Poor Harry - he's so confused and Norman's a bastard who understands how to use this to his advantage.

Haha, Peter's reaction is pretty amusing. Not outraged, just kind of, "Hmm, I didn't plan on losing my virginity this way, but...oh well."

Nice work with this. I'm looking forward to Peter's infiltration attempt! Please write more soon!

~fd97
Harlequin Jade chapter 5 . 6/10/2008
Damn. I so wanna read more! please update again soon!
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