|Reviews for Whiskey Tango Foxtrot!|
| BlatantBookworm chapter 12 . 5/14/2012
Since this was about two years ago, i doubt you will ever continue but... let me know if you ever do!
| BlatantBookworm chapter 9 . 5/14/2012
Cool! Keep it up, please!
| BlatantBookworm chapter 6 . 5/14/2012
Haha LOL love it!
I was cracking up so hard... how the heck did you find so many awesome Batman lines? I mean, a fair few could be Chuck Norris ones originally but the 'Bat-Glare' is pretty much just him.
| BlatantBookworm chapter 5 . 5/14/2012
In the Guinness Book of World Records, the record held for the shortest mutiny is held by the first incarnation of Titans East, when they attempted to usurp Bumble Bee's authority over unrecorded offences.
Their record is approximately thirteen seconds."
How would they know about that, i wonder.
| BlatantBookworm chapter 3 . 5/14/2012
Cool! Hope you explain how Catwoman met Rob.
I, personally, like 'The Batman's version of it.
Catwoman: "Why, Batman. You've got another sidekick. Do they make you feel tall?"
Robin: (sneezes) "Sorry, i'm allergic to cats. And bad jokes."
Season 4, episode something, Lock-Up.
Just in case you care or anything.
Great story so far.
| BlatantBookworm chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
Some are really funny, some are a bit less funny and more... not quite angsty but - uh, drama. That works.
Like word shots. They're cool.
| Churnok chapter 12 . 6/29/2011
A well done mix of humor and tabloid drama. If there were any problems I was too captivated by the story to notice. Also hard to cite any points that are significantly better than any other points here. Honestly hope Jade and Roy somehow find a way to keep their baby.
If the next chapter in this anthology is not a continuation of this story arch you will have some annoyed fans.
| Churnok chapter 11 . 6/29/2011
Typo or two outside the poem but otherwise a very...stimulating poetry fic. Raven's reactions during the performance were fun to read and I like how Beast Boy returned to "normal" once he was finished. Not to mention the reactions of Raven's mental aspects after he left. Though I do wish you could have worked their respective colors into that part.
Seriously hoping you do a followup story showing what gave Beast Boy the idea for that whole performance.
| Redtha chapter 6 . 7/3/2010
I was looking up Andre LeBlanc in google and this popped up. Having Red Star fight him was a nice reference to his original comics appearance as Starfire. And yay for mentions of Matt Logan! :D
I've read this before and it's still as great as now as it was then. I hope you'll continue with the stories you have in this fic. -
| Redtha Fan chapter 12 . 3/31/2010
These are fun. You should do more of the little snippets and expand on some. More Redtha/Hotgent/Speedshire please.
| Tari Silmarwen chapter 12 . 1/15/2010
Figures, I take my computer to the shop and thus lose access to it for a few days and you decide to upload a new chapter in the interim.
I liked how you went earlier and earlier across the time zones. I giggled at Robin's part.
...holy cow is that a shout out to Titans Oceanic?
Nicely written little action scene.
"Roy had a suspicion that Jade probably got it from whatever place Robin did." AH HA HA HA! Oh dear, this whole battle is so hilariously awkward.
Think this was my favorite line: "“Wait… She’s Jade?” No Bumblebee, she’s Mary Tyler Freakin’ Moore."
LIAN! SQUEE! Oh boy, Speedy's in trouble now. I assume this is what led to Robin's file on them back in the first Words chapter? (Internal continuity, huzzah!) Loved Ollie's reaction the most.
Aww Bats! Come on, it wasn't ROBIN'S fault...
I find it rather cute how Mas and Menos took the time to make Cheshire a door plate. And the Speedy/Cheshire dramatic talk was strangely heartwarming. Well done my good man. An entertainting read.
| Story Weaver1 chapter 12 . 1/14/2010
Oh there's SO much stuff I like about this.
First, the whole different POV thing is a very interesting...setting device. its like literay reaction shots. The scene is set up from all these POV and then the main action, then the POV reactions, and then theh closing. I really like it.
Alfred, the gentleman's gentleman. That was great. the detail at the start with the razor and all was kinda confusing but it makes sense for Alfred.
'besides, it'll tick Bats, off' LOL! That scene was fun to play in my head and the following one too.
Lots of drama, and you do it well. If I had to critize something, I would say some sentences are too long. Like the paragraph after 'Hello, Roy." too many actions in one sentence.
Sidekick...If Roy's willing to admit to that, he must /really/ feel bad.
Jade's nameplate is adorable. I can just picture Mas and Menos drawing around the command room.
Looking forward to part 3!
| titanfan45 chapter 12 . 1/12/2010
That was excellent. You did great with the small part that Alfred played. The phone call from Batman to Robin was also done well, I would think that it would be very hard to not be quick to obey when Batman tells you to do something.
| Star of Airdrie chapter 12 . 1/12/2010
This was fantastic! Very good ans well written.
I love that issue with 'Dick you slut' when he 'accidentally' slept with Miri pretending to be Kory. Good times, good times.
Thanks for updating!
| Emily Snow21 chapter 2 . 1/12/2010
lol! I was scared reading this like...oh man they're gonna kiss! I love rob/star and I really don't get rob/rae...
Lol your comment at the bottom! I KNOW! Why can't people get that?