|Reviews for One Way Ticket to Potter's World|
| Ellie2981 chapter 2 . 7/4/2013
AWESOME, though why do they start calling her emma foster? post more!
| surfgirl1 chapter 2 . 11/16/2009
i like it. however you switched her last name halfway through.
| Orin chapter 2 . 1/10/2009
This is definitely your best yet. It seems you put more of YOU into it - by shading the dialog with your own ideas, the characters have more personality, and everything just works better together. I like how not everything is spelled out from the beginning - the reader is kept wondering a bit as the situation is slowly revealed - but not completely, so you could still fill in details about who this girl is, what happened, etc. So if you want to continue developing this story, it would probably turn out awesome. Personally, I'd like to see what happens when you give yourself complete freedom - let your mind loose to invent a whole new world, with characters all your own. Either way, you're doing great - just keep writing!
| This Profile Has Been Deleted chapter 2 . 12/25/2008
cool. Haha Emma Watson. that's sorta funy
| Tara Ash chapter 1 . 5/11/2008
Yay! Need another chapter! Looks pretty good so far though . . . The only thing is maybe add another space between lines so they're seperate.