|Reviews for Napoleon and Rapp: Battle of Borodino|
| Jake chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
I absolutely loved it. Great writing!
| A Lucky Stone chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
Nice... I couldn't find the exact page you referenced, since I have a different copy, but I get the idea. I love extended scenes and the like
You write well, too The ending seems a bit sudden - maybe put a bit more of Rapp's emotion into his thoughts? Also, a little more justification of why/how he realises that Napoleon is a man just like him would be nice.
Overall, though, it's very nice. It would be interesting to see what the repercussions of Rapp's realisation are, if you felt like writing a sequel _~