|Reviews for A World Without Superman: Reworked!|
| Guest chapter 9 . 5/22
| EvilTheLast chapter 9 . 10/5/2011
Nice update. I didn't see Lex coming.
| The Layman chapter 9 . 9/29/2011
I don't remember all the details, but I'm pretty sure that the invisible jet's not NOT Amazonian. Other than that it was another good chapter. Keep pumping them out, man!
| Lion in the Land chapter 9 . 9/28/2011
There are a lot of moving parts here, and I'll admit to being slightly fuzzy on some of the details of exactly wHat's going on - but I know that's only because I'm not familiar w/ these universes. *Even still* I do get most of the gist.
Interesting motivation for Charlie, that he's simply doing it for someone he cares about. What a great friend to have. I got a kick out of the "something obvious."
It’s cool we got another look at that Terminator burning. “It looked like the fires of hell consuming a metal demon.” Nice description.
This is a long shot, but “Express elevator, my arse” - is that a Something About Mary reference?
Pretty smooth moves by Rayner, as opposed to Lois exercising all the subtlety of . . . er, something that's not very subtle.
Yay, Seras! I’m so happy the two of them have kept up a correspondence. :D
Um, Lex Luthor’s a bad guy, right? Just teasing! Pretty clever w/ the poster and gum. It felt very comic-book-like.
| Haissan chapter 8 . 9/7/2011
Much more feasible than the last edition of this chapter.
| The Layman chapter 8 . 9/7/2011
| olischulu chapter 8 . 9/7/2011
First signs of Jameron?
I like it.
But who is the new player?
| EvilTheLast chapter 8 . 9/6/2011
Nice chapter. I didn't see the Kryptonite coming.
| Lion in the Land chapter 8 . 9/6/2011
"quite literally - analyzing his body." Hehe, that was very cute. His life's in peril and he's worried about a girl seeing him in his undies. *Even still* how nice of her to to put him at ease Dread Pirate Roberts style. ;P
The interaction w/ Lois and Richard was nice. Is this Rayner canon from anything?
Tense fight. The kryptonite shocked me (always fun to be surprised during a fight scene :)) and gave a plausible reason for both why the terminator would think he'd die and why he didn't. I thought it was hilarious that the identifying factor of Kal-El's son was the "spit curl"! :D
| The Layman chapter 7 . 8/19/2011
Does anyone else get the felling that this plan's going to backfire SOMEHOW? Anyone? Beuller?
Bjut sriously, I am interested to see what's going to happen next for our intrepid heroes.
| olischulu chapter 7 . 8/19/2011
Well... I'm not a a specialist in DNA but I really think that thing with the cells from Johns face wouldn't work.
I think this whole sintetic skin thing wouln't work. Sounds just not very logical to me.
Just his protector...
No Jameron? Thats sad.
What can I say, it's your story.
A nice one.
| sumofme chapter 7 . 8/18/2011
The story is very interesting, but I do have a small question: Is this a Cameron and John romance story or a Cameron and Jason story? If it's the latter I don't know if I wanna continue to read. Cameron with someone other than John is just too out of character for me.
| Lion in the Land chapter 7 . 8/18/2011
Bleh, a bag o' flesh is just sooo creepy...but in the very best of ways. I like the scene with Cameron kneading it w/ John's DNA. Her "very real looking flesh" was a nice reminder, or irony maybe, that she too has synthetic flesh. All the reflections on Cameron in this chapter were nicely done.
I also like how Jason still feels just a bit out of sync with the Connor gang, like the Dr. Who thing.
This chapter contained more good background for me, but I'm a little confused about the Sarah Reese thing.
Favorite line of the chapter: "I've been accused of a lot of things in my life, but having good judgment was never one of them."
Glad to see you're still pursuing the re-edits. :)
| The Layman chapter 6 . 7/27/2011
Hmm, throwing Steele in here was an interesting move. I'm curious to see how this affects the storyline later on.
| EvilTheLast chapter 6 . 7/19/2011
Interesting chapter. So John Henry Irons is going to build himself a small army of 'Men Of Steal'? Well, no good deed goes unpunished. And often end up hurting some innocent people in the process in some way. I wonder if his 'terminators' will have files of all wanted criminals...including Sarah and John Connor. I can John and/or Sarah getting 'Citizen Arrest' by one of JHI 'terminators'.