|Reviews for SAKURA FIRST LOVE chap 1|
| Cattshire chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
Gosh, you're mean Last Bastard.
Well... there was problems with it, though. It was kinda dull, you know? And you write like a 8 year old. You should write more sentences and make paragraphs, not short dialogues. Explain what the history teacher looks like and stuff, and explain the background, the school, etc. Not everyone watches, Naruto, you know.
Do not take this a flame. enjoy the rest of your day
| Last Bastard Standing chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
You should be lucky you're even getting a review at all. People who don't give a flyin' fuck about this, just left it alone. So be lucky and thankful that your two reviews were telling you that you sucked at this and need to get better before you make a fool of yourself.
(It really is kind of terrible, that's the honest truth)
.You just got flamed.