|Reviews for Insomnia|
| 1412 karasu chapter 39 . 3/28
It's been two years, so I doubt this will update, but I love this fic so much! So muh detail and planning went into this, and I was really looking forward to seeing all of the Links and how you tie all the timelines together.
| GoldenGriffiness chapter 27 . 3/25
Nice chapter, you lend great character to these blank slates :) I always had this cruel wish to find a story where Link meets the friends/families of his masks in honesty, and what the reactions would be.
| Philozophy chapter 39 . 3/24
Please, please, PLEASE don't let this end here. Oh my god, I binge read it the other night and I've just been rereading it since. You're not even at Snowhead Temple yet! Great Bay! Like, Ikana Valley, man! Stone Tower Temple! That place was my favorite! Don't stop with Gorons! They're not even awake and rolling Gorons, they're asleep Gorons!
I love Tatl, by the way. Crazy little psycho, growing on me like that. I like your version of Link too, how he's not cocky like some other people write him, he's just a weird, awkward kid.
So please. Don't let this end here.
| Firefury Amahira chapter 39 . 3/7
AAAGH! Three near-sleepless nights binge-reading this entire fic and I'm out if story! T_T
Please please PLEEEEEEASE don't leave this unfinished! The way you're tackling the story is freakin' awesome! I really like the way you're portraying the effects of OoT on poor Link, and the time-travel out-of-order sidequests are pure genius! (Also reeeeally wanna see if you've got anything planned for the Fierce Deity mask, too.)
| Guest chapter 37 . 3/6
what is this homestuck bullshit?
| AnonymouseXI chapter 39 . 2/18
bless this story and bless your heart youre amazing at writing and im suprised youve gotten as far as you have without dropping this
i hope life is being kind to you and i wish you the best of luck in finishing this masterpiece, im really looking forward to it (also ive re-read this story like three or four times its so beautiful)
| Steveaaml chapter 35 . 2/15
If somebody came up to me and said "Hey, you can choose one work of fanfiction that you want to see completed, and I promise it'll happen," it'd be this one. No question. Just reread it this afternoon. Always fun.
| KnownForHardlyNothing chapter 17 . 2/5
Eh, for whatever reason the characters seem kinda of...Lifeless? maybe the dituation is just far too gloomy that any glowing sign up life in the characters Is noticeable for a fraction of the second before it's snuffed out. Maybe I just got to use the humor in other stories...Nah just not enough actual -humor, not many light-hearted jokes or anything really...
| KnownForHardlyNothing chapter 9 . 2/5
Could someone PLEASE explain to me what the deal with 413 was?
| KnownForHardlyNothing chapter 5 . 2/5
So i'm guessing the food dye incident was a prank concerning food dye, a hair brush and a very angry great fairy?
| KnownForHardlyNothing chapter 1 . 2/5
That first part of the authors note was pure brilliance. I read it and then proceeded to burst into laughter.
| FE96jAFFAR chapter 39 . 1/16
This is an absolutely amazing novelization! Read it from the very beginning, and loving it. I've never seen someone use the concurrent timeline idea before, although it does make a lot of sense - it's a good answer to "how do Link's actions keep their effects between each cycle?", and you've written it well.
I like that Link is mostly 'normal', but there are obvious things here and there that fit very well with the way he was raised and what he went through in OoT. The Link/Tatl interactions are great, and I like how they can go so easily from chill to tense depending on the topic (like with real people - the lighter the topic, the easier it is to be nice and polite).
| GlassGazer chapter 27 . 1/3
I love it when you do chapters like these. They're so memorable and they leave that feeling after you finish them, you know?
| xXxAMPERSANDxXx chapter 39 . 12/4/2014
So... Are you dead?
| Postalballet chapter 39 . 11/17/2014
Oh, woe is me! I for once get really into an uncompleted work and you haven't updated in a million years! Please don't be dead and please come back and finish this up! or at least a chapter! I'd even take half a chapter! If you care about us at all, post so we can stop worrying about your health!