Reviews for Close Protection, of a Sort |
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BreathingMagic chapter 9 . 3/7/2016 Gaah what happened? No more updates? But this is so good! :'( *sniff* I'll just have to follow your story and hope for a miracle, I guess... |
dorfchaosgenie chapter 9 . 1/12/2016 Noooo! Why must it end? Please please continue! It's just way to awesome :D |
YokaiAngel chapter 9 . 11/13/2015 Wow~ |
booksandbeaches chapter 9 . 8/28/2015 This is a really good story! I hope that you'll continue it:) |
TimeyWimeyBadWolf chapter 9 . 8/18/2015 Very well written story, super awesome. It'd be lovely if you continued it! |
TimeyWimeyBadWolf chapter 7 . 8/18/2015 I LOVE your headcanon of Eagle as a tech geek. So perfect! |
TimeyWimeyBadWolf chapter 2 . 8/17/2015 I love Smithers too! I'm writing him into one of my fanfics right now! |
Guest chapter 2 . 8/17/2015 This is really great, and I just wanted to tell you that I once drank two cans of Rockstar, then almost immediately fell asleep with my head out of a window and sunburnt half my face. |
teenwriter827 chapter 5 . 5/25/2015 As a US Marine I can say safely, that Alex would be having quite a bit of trouble. I was shot in the chest, just barely past my heart, 2 years ago and I only just got back on active duty last month |
Alibi Nonsense chapter 8 . 5/15/2015 I especially like the part where he's overhearing Fox. That part's really sweet and lovely, especially the 'he's like a brother' part. The fact Fox hid that he was coming there was quite funny, and I liked the way Alex got really sick and tired of all the other kids saying how great it would be. Also, you've really fleshed out the characters of his friends. I like that: they're not just faceless entities, even if there are a lot of them. :) |
Alibi Nonsense chapter 1 . 5/14/2015 I'll review properly in a bit, but just to say, with the Britishisms... I'm not sure it would be 'homeroom'. I think it would be 'tutor'. I've only been to one secondary school, so I don't know if it's just where I went, but that's the only thing that stands out. :) Just me being pernickety. |
Dani9513 chapter 1 . 10/8/2014 Don't beat yourself up. I personally adored that speech blunt gave. |
shinyverse chapter 2 . 10/6/2014 They are from the British television series MI 5 or Spooks, and Harry Pierce was the head of 5 while Adam Carter was an the show for a while heading the unit before he died from a car bomb on Remembrance Day. |
Alibi Nonsense chapter 9 . 9/15/2014 You can really get into this story, you know? I like your style... and the bit when Fox was defending Alex without knowing he was being oveheard. That was :') heartening. |
Guest chapter 8 . 9/3/2014 Honestly my metaphorial boner for this story went right the fuck down when you started blasting that Anna girl for being attractive, and attempting to get laid. Alex is one fine specimen of a man, I'd be going for him too in that situation. Seriously, can we maybe not make this a "Women with a sex drive? BURN THE WITCH!" type story? Please? |