I hope this isn't one of those Alex is a wimp and can't keep up because I think it would be perfectly normal if Alex was at least second or third best, no need to be absolutely dreadful! :) Very nice writing and I'm excited to read more!

Mmm, I need a fire place and a hot coco.

Please update! this is very interesting! i want to know what happens next! do your best!

First off- You are a brilliant author! Seriously, the best I've read on ff. Secondly- PLEASE UPDATE THIS! I am obsessed, and have sort of been stalking you ;) I went to your love journal, but found that hasn't been updated in a while either. If you really aren't ever going to come back, could you post something in your bio so people stop waiting for an update or put it up for adoption? I have really been looking forward to seeing the scar reveal to K-Unit, and if you aren't continuing could you post the drafts you wrote for the reveal maybe just as oneshots? I would love read them!

Hello -

I understand that you haven't posted on this story for quite a while, and therefore the chance of you reading this is minimal, but I thought I'd comment on this out of courtesy.

At the beginning you apologize for five things listed. Don't apologize.
Ever. Especially not at the front, and especially not before someone
complains. It's just a really bad habit to get into. If you do end up
making mistakes, don't apologize until you're called out on them,
because chances are no one's going to notice, and it won't matter. And
if you apologize before hand especially, readers will go on to pick out
and search for what you've listed. And no matter what you've written,
half of them will find things wrong with it, to do with what you listed, and
the other half won't find anything and will think you're fishing for
compliments by bringing out false mistakes, so people will feel obliged
to reassure you and compliment you.

That is all I have to say for now.
- A Reader

Aw, gutted you never go is he'd this! Anyway, absolutely loved it!(:

I love Enders Game. I had to read it for B.O.B. thi sis one of the better stories about him going to Brecon Beacons? I have noticed a few things off, like loose when it should be lose. Little thing like that should be kept in mind.

Oh. My. God.

Poor Alex. I feel bad for laughing, but this is priceless.

Hi! This is a really good fic with great characterization and scenes (my new favorite, actually) and I would love to see more! On your profile it said you never abandon stories, so... fingers crossed that this will remind you to update? Have a nice day!

please continue!

pls update!

Ender's Game is nice! It's cool how you slip in that reference

I'm really loving this, please continue.

Oh my goodness! I LOVE this story! Please, please, please, update this story soon!

The thing I really wanted to bring to your notice is the way you introduce your OC's.

Usually writers mention a whole description, from their skin tone to the clothes they were wearing. it is true that this helps in visualization, however I find that this causes unnecessary attention to be drawn to these new characters, and thus divergence from the plot.

I prefer your way. If you hadn't mentioned they were OC's, (in your Authors note), I never would have guessed.

Thanks.