OK, the idea for this story has been used over and over, but most of them aren't very good (yes, except for Amitai's). I don't mind the theme, it's fun to read. Will you have K-unit in this story? If so, what's their excuse of being back in training?

The only Americanism I encountered was the mention of 'homeroom', I think (but I can't be sure). It's a high school thing...

What's the problem with Blunt's speech? The guy's a cold you-know-what. I think he was IC, but I can't check because I don't have the books here. And although he is very unsympathetic, he was right. MI6 only sent him on a mission twice. The rest of it was more or less his own fault.

I love the way you described Alex' reasoning, on how he can't just walk away, how he feels a responsibility now that he know he can do something.

Can't be your beta (although I'd love to), I'm not British. I did spot some grammar errors, but nothing worth turning away from this story for.

Can't wait for the next chapter,

Nylah

good first chpater, iloved it!

PLZ PLZ plz update!

hey great chapter! i can't wait to for the next chapter! your a great writer D

-cass

Please add more chapters soon

Cassandra

up date soon!

I love this kind of story! Keep posting! Blunt's speech wasn't so bad. I was a bit confused bout the homeroom thing does that mean his homeroom class is going?

YAY! I LOVE these type of stories so much, they are EXCELLENT! This one sounds brillaint so far, i can't wait to read the next chapter! So please keep up the excellent work and please update again as soon as you get the chance.

Until next time, bye 4 now! :)

Wow, I like the story so far. There's one story that caught my attention though. 'He was angry.'It just sounded kind of strange among the rest of Alex's thoughts...

And by the way, I loved the speech that Blunt gave! I don't think I'd put it past him to do something like that, although I pity Alex. Anyway, waiting for your next update!

m,

im interested.

i hope you coutinue.