|Reviews for A Life Stolen|
| Evelyn08 chapter 18 . 5/25/2009
OMG this story and the first installment of it were really sweet and at the same time didn't make things between bella and edward easy like a fairytale meeting, relationship, and marriage. because lets face it no life is picture perfect and sometimes its stories like yours that make the story good whether its original or not.
| Lilbunny84 chapter 18 . 5/21/2009
Amazing. Kept me gript the whole way through. Keep writting.
| ChestyLaRue413 chapter 17 . 5/5/2009
Great story but Owen Charles Masen? reminds me of Charles Manson the serial killer...Theres nothing wrong with owen charles its jus the last name lol...anyways awesome story )
| littlewing1975 chapter 18 . 5/4/2009
Fantastic story and great writing. Can't wait to read more of your stuff.
| mermaidsong25 chapter 3 . 4/30/2009
I almost freaked out reading this story. I could have been reading my own diary. I had an incompetant cervix, which is what I think you ment not incomplete cervix. every thing else is right on target.
I am glad that they worked through their grief. Lots fo couples don't survive such a loss.
Wow, such trauma in this story. Whish my story had a good ending. well it did sort of I remarried and was able to have a son.
The hope here is uplifting.
| AppleGreenBlueberry chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
I just noticed that I never wrote directly that I really like your story... But you got the point by yourself I hope )
You described it all very well and I most immediately understood everything you tried to explain. Even if it was so annoying to look up many(!) words in a dictionary... Fortunelly my computer has a great program which translates every English word in German ) That helps a lot!
| AppleGreenBlueberry chapter 18 . 4/30/2009
So now I could finally manage to read the last chapters! It was really sad when I read that Bella is happier with Jake than with Edward, but gladly it all ended well! That is always my main point if I read stories; As long as it include a Happy End, all possible or impossible things can happen! )And I guess at that point(when you created Owen Charles Masen) you hadn't known of Breaking Dawn yet, right?
But why do you choose to relate Jake and Angela? Isn't it weird? At least I feel that way... )
| Lata525 chapter 18 . 4/27/2009
I just finished reading this story and I have to tell you I was blown away. I really enjoyed the rollercoaster that was this story. I immediately started reading this as soon as I finished reading "A Heart's Savior". It is very rare to read a sequel that is good if not better than the first story. I also applaud you on writing about the sensitive issue of prenatal death. I have a close relative who lost a baby at five months also and reading this really hit close to home. Your story can give her and many others hope for the future. I look forward to reading your other work.
| AppleGreenBlueberry chapter 3 . 4/27/2009
oh no! this is soo sad! why? why did you decide to let the baby die?
i really hope that will never ever happen to me, if i get a baby! can't imagine what it would be like, even if you described it very well.
| Transfiguration chapter 18 . 4/23/2009
that was absolutely so adorable-and heart breaking! I def. cried with edward and bella's pain...losing a child is def. a huge fear and im not any where near that stage of life...which I guess is why they struggled so much: neither were they...thank you so much for writing this beautiful story and taking your time to understand these characters and let us into their lives.
| Twilight Addict Brenda chapter 18 . 4/23/2009
Wow, this surpassed the first story.. So beautifully written, I loved every word of it! Great job!
| nessa1178 chapter 18 . 4/23/2009
I LOVE THE STORY I HAD TEAR IN MY EYES WHEN HE WAS GOING TO LEAVE HER SO SHE COULD BE HAPPY I WISH IT WOULD HAVE BEEN TWIN THOUGH AND THAT THE STORY WOULD CONTINUE
| studybug2008 chapter 18 . 4/19/2009
Ok so besides the heart-wrenching scene at the start of this story, I loved loved loved it! I was completely wrapped up in all the emotional ups and downs involved in this story which made for one of the most heartfelt stories I've ever read. Very well done! :)
| inhaaaaaale chapter 18 . 4/12/2009
A Heart's Savior and A Life Stolen are beautiful stories. I enjoyed them deeply. You are a great writer.
| Happy Bells chapter 12 . 4/11/2009
Whoa! Another intense chapter! Your writing is very good at making people feel things!