amazing. i love the emotions and the hard ship it gave the story personality that everyone can relate to.

"Incompetent cervix..." Although I noted the wrong medical term in earlier chapters, I figured that someone else would have said something about it, but here it is again. An "incomplete cervix" would suggest that portions of the cervix were actually missing. The medical condition you describe in your book is called an incompetent cervix, and is normally controlled with a "purse-string" procedure, where sutures are placed around the cervix and pulled tightly to close the cervical os. At full term, the sutures are snipped, and delivery occurs... I'd change the terminology if I were you. Your books are good enough to be published, and it's always good to put your best foot forward in case your stories happen to catch some publisher's eye. Best Regards, ymi2bz4t (retired OB nurse)

i cant believe he is not talking to her
why are you scared bella? of what bella?
he just says its ok i love you which is great but they need the conversation as well

thank you for your story's. I so enjoyed reading them!

awww awesome story, i loved it

Beautiful story! It was utterly tragic yet hopeful. Once I started this one I refused to stop reading it until I reached the end. You're a wonderful writer!

Congratulations by the way! Children are one of the greatest joys of life. I don't have any of my own, but I tend to smother my two nephews with hugs and kisses (and I'm going to be an aunt again soon ).

*snorts*

Bella SHOULD have fucking learned from Edward's mistakes in the previous story. I get that she has felt something no decent caring and loving woman should. But Jesus Christ did she handle it wrong. I certainly wouldn't have completely blamed Edward if he asked for a legal seperation while they tried counseling.

I think I loved that even more than A Hearts Savior...and that's sayin' a lot!

I can not imagine how it would feel to lose a baby like that and try to get passed it. I have 3 kids and have never dealt with something that horrible.

amazing job! thanks for sharing your talent!

Loved your stories. Looking forward for more... Thanks

this is a really good sequel to the other, though it also has an abrupt ending...

loved this story so emotional but a really good read xx

I've now read both of these stories and have thoroughly enjoyed them. I know its three years since you finished this one. I hope your life has continued happily since then.

Loved it!

Bella was right, she doesn't deserve him.

I loved it! Great job! Please write more! Your really good!