|Reviews for The New Adventures of Darkwing Duck|
| Known Unknown chapter 29 . 3/18/2010
Isn't it generally a really bad idea to leave evil people in the past? XD.
Anyway, loving the series so far, and I'm not even halfway through yet. It's great.
| Known Unknown chapter 2 . 3/17/2010
How noble of Darkwing, letting them go like that. I remember back in the series he'd sometimes do that and sometimes he'd lie and use the promise as an excuse to lock someone up if they ticked him off.
On the other hand, he only really tricked Megavolt like that ("I thought you were supposed to be the hero!"), and, as we all know, bad stuff happening to Megavolt is immediately funny.
| acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 78 . 2/20/2010
Thanks for telling about the hiatus. Take your time.
Very good job, as always; excellent character interaction and quite smart use of all the villains and heroes' resources at hand.
Bob's death was quite unexpected; a major twist. And Morgana's reaction was a lot like the one she had once to stop her family from fighting the villagers in the series.
Keep the good writing.
| Wolvmbm chapter 78 . 2/19/2010
First off my friend, it has been awhile hasn't it ? ;D
I can understand where you're coming from with the whole college situation, as I too have dealt with college cutting into my own free time. :(
Still it's understandable and nice of you to let your readers know that this story will be a while for quite a while. Maybe when you do get back into it, maybe make it like your precessor and have it been two years since the fighting began. :D
However that would have made it a slight more edgier and darker storyline.
Now on to the chapter itself, as I was surprised to see Neutraduck coming back and I've nearly forgotten his last encounter with Negaduck and his crew.
Nice of you to bring us readers up to speed with the whole villains thing, as we see that Negs still has the advantage. :(
Also to see Nega-Gosalyn question her own death, when Negaduck wasn't even around for it, is a bit interesting as it seems that Negerian has not only brought her back to live, but somehow the forces of evil place her under a stronger brainwashing spell. :(
However, I think it would be interesting to see her try to make a play at Honker, who isn't under any spell, since she is the Negaversion of his best friend, who kind of likes him more than a friend.
As for the story I must say it's bad for the good guys when Neutraduck returns, and I never thought I see the day when even Negaduck was scare of someone, a true surprise for me.
Still the cost of the battle made the heroes lose a dear friend within Bob, and Christine was right into questioning what would happen when Drake finally hears the news of Bob's death. :(
I mean who knows if Drake does try to make a play at Morgana again, however you previous chapters in showing what life would have been like if Drake DID marry Morgana, may come into play in for the final decision.
Bob was kind of an okay guy and a great friend, and he will be missed within the story. :(
Speaking of Darkwing, your one little hint of where is he makes me wonder...when Negaduck means that Darkwing is some where "Safe," that must mean he's in real danger. :(
Also where is Launchpad, in all of this as well ? :(
I'm kind of surprised to see Hooter still alive, and serving Negs is a real surprising and funny treat and great punishment coming from someone like him.
I'm very much surprised to see Negaduck letting Neutraduck live after all he done, but the punishment he gave him was satisfying enough along with the threat was true Negaduck form. :D
Now the good guys are down to one magician left in Morgana, and they need an advantage soon.
I must ask though, besides Neptunia, and great way in explaining why she couldn't come, even if they don't want to be discovered, isn't the Agency looking into this situation at all ? :(
Plus what about Future Gosalyn/Crimson...I mean in one of your chapters you made a brief mentioning of Darkwing's future fate and it has me wondering if that too can be changed ? :(
Sill sorry to drag this out long, but with Morgana the only source of magic left, could their little reversal spell spotion be active by the next chapter and if so who can they free frist from the villains control ? :(
This was a great update and I wish to encourage you upon such a great series. Please do take your time on this story, I'll be here waiting for your next update. ;D
| Malarity chapter 78 . 2/19/2010
Oh man... the moment Crimson remarked that Nega-Bob was dead, and then Bob said to Morgana "So long as you've got me we won't have any problems with this" I immediately went "D: He's a dead duck."
I have mixed feelings on it. I think how Morgana moved on and married someone else is very realistic, and would likely happen. But I'm a DW x Morg fan at heart, so I always secretly root for them to be together. So now I feel bad, because I liked Bob, but at the same time the shipper in me is like "Oh..." I get the feeling that Darkwing may surprise us all, with how he handles this.
And sorry to hear about the hiatus :( I'm in university too, and it's the reason I haven't updated my own fic since the summer. It's so hard to concentrate on writing stories about crazy crime fighting ducks when you've got exams to write! Here's hoping you bring us a chapter in the future though :)
| Pulpomolcagetero chapter 70 . 12/19/2009
... I liked this story ... the truth is I had read nothing of NADWD apart from "Darkwing Duck returns and seeing that recently upgraded ... I told myself ... Why not give it a chance ?... I admit that I am not pro MorgXDrake ... or when the series was popular ... the truth ... but that if ... I always had an impression of her ... especially when she was a villain, was shown to have some nobility to save DW and LP, when he could Aberle transformed into an exclave zombie under her every whim ... but honestly I could never see her mother for a possible com Gos ... the truth is I do not think anyone could opcupar that place ... I believe that you also think so ... Gos as Morg Mom never appointed, and if this was an oversight, a conscious act or even an unconscious act on your part ... because you think that Gos anteriorment as I could not ask for someone to call mother ... that's something you just know.
About that if Drake is able to do this sort of thing ... if you believe and the makers of DW also was believed at the time ... and we all remember the evil intentions of Dark Warrior Duck when he was in possession of the Trompo Time ... (If this poorly written excuse me, I speak Spanish and I am using a translator) my first thought when he realized he was a time machine was to change history without considering the consequences that could destroy the universe or at least the story of his own planet. .. demonstrating that he is able to do things like this and worse ... and I think the scariest part was when estubo Crimson about to destroy the future ... I thought of how close this combertirce in Dark Warrior ... I hope to read more of these adventures ... clear in an order ... although I admit that when I saw the original series ... I did not see an order ... in all honesty ... Gos me knowing that was adopted when he had already seen half of the chapters ... placed there because the pilot ... besides that is to say that his adopted daughter Gos ... is a mistake ... it is simply his daughter ... and the relationship of Drake and it is what really gave always the interest and why not say ... was my reason to see each chapter ... so I want to nominate Mallard Drake as one of 10 parents of animation more authentic ... What do you think?
Rowe and include in the group ... good again ... I like the idea ... continues to work with it and see what happens.
| Wolvmbm chapter 77 . 12/18/2009
Wow this was some chapter. I mean I half expected for Darkwarrior duck to team up with Crimson and the resistance, because of the old saying "The enemy of my enemy is my frined,but what you did in this chapter was even more interesting as well.
It seems that we haven't heard the last of the Warrior Universe or have we based on that last line of the chapter ? :)
I did enjoy the Morgana and Christine moment, as both sort of act as a "Mother" to Crimson, when Darkwing isn't around. :)
Also nice way of updating Agent Todd, it seems that within this adventure is shaping him up into becoming the ideal agent. :D
I must also comment on Crimson and Agent Todd coming up against Gizmoduck, but weirdly slient. It's truly showed a creepiness factor within that one.
It also seems that the resistance do have an idea of how Negaduck's army is controlling their friends and families, so maybe that's a good thing and it could be use to their advantage. However the question is who to rescue first ? :(
Plus a Honker moment, shows that he still has faith in Crimson, despite the fact that she doesn't realize that he's alive and unharm. :D
Also the confrontation between Crimson and her Negaverse counterpart shows that there is still a bit of the true Nega Crimson within her, fighting against the mind-controll/brainwashing. :D
The death of Darkwarrior was a shock, but at least there is one less alternate Darkwing Duck to worry about. :D
Please do keep up the good work upon this great series of yours as I can't wait to see what happens next.
I mean who knows what could happen...Like Nega Crimson fallen for Honker or something like that as an idea for a future chapter. ;)
| acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 77 . 12/18/2009
Another excellent chapter.
M... a portar to Darkwarrior's universe. Wonder if Gos and company can get something useful from there.
Keep the good writing.
| Malarity chapter 77 . 12/18/2009
Gasp, I possible return of Neutraduck in the near future, perhaps?
I like Christine/Morg moments. They're an interesting pair, since they have Darkwing in common, and it must be a little awkward for them, yet they must work together to get things done, and save their friends.
| ThunderRiver411 chapter 76 . 12/17/2009
This is a good story. I hope you continue to write stories and don't give up. I'm also working on a story if you want to check it out.
| LADYMALLARD chapter 76 . 12/15/2009
This has certainly been quite a chapter, With St. Canard under Negaduck's and his incarnats from the other universes thumbs, For Now. With only Crimson, Tecno(although he is a prisoner) Christine and Charlie, Morgana and her husband and S.H.U.S.H agent Todd in their right minds, As far as we know. I hope they can figure a way to foil these villains. It will be tough to wait to find out what has happened to Darkwing, Giz and Launchpad as well as others. This was a tension filled chapter, but I sort of got a kick out of Nanite Darkwing's stuttered speech, it reminded me of Hal, the robotic leader of the mechanized planet, (from the last chapter) in space, featured in the intro of GizmoDuck. in Duck Tales. Fenton, challenged him to a battle of brains when brawn didn't work. This part was very exciting, I await the next chapter with eager anticipation. till next time.
| 20yearfriend chapter 76 . 11/27/2009
Wow! What a great chapter! And an interesting one!
So much still up in the air! I am with Crimson! Gotta find the others! Glad we at least saw where Techno is, poor guy! Bet he finds a way to throw a curve ball in Negaduck's plans!
Where in the world and what in the world has Negs done with Giz and especially DW? And where is LP?
I would think that Negs has to have something VERY special in mind for DW! LOL
Great Job! Can't wait for more!
| acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 76 . 11/26/2009
Yeah, a really dark chapter, yet very well written.
And wonder if Honker can play a trick or two of his own techno-skills while working on Nanite.
Keep the good writing.
| Wolvmbm chapter 76 . 11/26/2009
Wow if this is just a taste of how bad things have gotten, then I can't wait to see what else you have plan for this adventure. :D
I mean WOW, as it seems that it was kind of nice of you to refer to Scrooge and have him and Norrin in the same room, it could also mean that Scrooge have had some past dealings/visits within the government and the White house. :D
Plus the survivors of the previous battle seems grim as it shows that nearly all hope is lost and that Crimson is affected by it all. :(
Poor girl, losing her family within a battle that big, maybe a few kind words can try to pentrate her cloud of anger. :(
Also Christine, Charlie and Agent Todd are risking alot to join up with Morgana, Bob and Crimson to save the city, but they need all the help they can get. :D
Also Techno's alive, maybe that can give Crimson the hope she needs. :D
This is some chapter and I wish for you to please keep up the good work upon such a great series. :D
| LADYMALLARD chapter 75 . 11/7/2009
A well written agonisingly exciting chapter. Boy the last two chapters have really been tough on our heros, a defeat in the other universe and now this cliffhanger AND it seems defeat for Darkwing and the other heros, as that evil magician has cast his spell, on Darkwing and Crimson. Where is Techno and Launchpad are they even, (Gulp) Alive? And what about Bushroot Rowe and QuackerJack, will they go against Negs and his other despicable doubles to help our heroes? I will certainly be on the edge of my seat and on Pins and needles, uncomfortably waiting for the next chapter to arrive..PLESE don't make it too long before the next one comes along. Till next time.