|Reviews for Gone Wrong|
| freakypetachick chapter 1 . 5/11/2008
you should add szayelXrenji - i love that pairing. or ulquiorraXbuakuya! or maybe even annerionoXstark! :3
| GhettoFury chapter 1 . 5/11/2008
I like it!
Uh - some pairings well maybe Ulgiorra and Kira. xD
Make it random...like crack except it will have purpose behind it.
Some criticism; It needs to flow a little bit more smoothly...make since? _;
| Siryns-magick chapter 1 . 5/11/2008
Great read and funny kinda (Gin and Tousen really do need to take half of their personality from the other). Possible other pairings: maybe one-sided Ren/Ichi (on Renji's part), Shuuhei/Kira or Ikkaku/Kira and Shuuhei/Yumi, Aizen/Gin, Stark/Ulqui.
So I'm guessing that Grimm and Ichigo are going to be in the middle of a battle when the /*side-effects*/ kick in leading to some non-con between the two and Ichigo's subsequent preggyness. I can also imagine Grimmjow becoming extremely possessive of his pregnant Ichigo afterwards.
| benihime.chan chapter 1 . 5/11/2008
Szial and Renji should hook up
love the story, ur off to a good start
| cherryblossom1217 chapter 1 . 5/11/2008
its really good whos gonna get pregant i wanna know upadte!