|Reviews for Footprints in the Sand|
| Aslan's Lamb chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
I love your portrayal of Bree. The insight into his character, the way he's not as cocky as he seems in the book. This line, "Because I can't stop; I'm the leader here, they're all depending on me," just shows how the burden of leadership can be so heavy at times...And then the Lion comes and brings hope.
| Queen Su chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
Queen Susan the Gentle, Cair Paravel, Narnia
*Aslan's Blood Never Fails Me*
| Swanwhite2 chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
This is great Val! That's just like Bree :) The last part is so good. It's like the poem footprints.
| MerrytheHobbit chapter 1 . 5/25/2008
Wow! Awesome! Amazing story!
| KCS chapter 1 . 5/14/2008
Oh, wonderful! Very vivid - I could see it all so clearly.
| fledge chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
Kind of a prequel to How Bree Became a Wiser Horse. Very beautifully written; the "My Son" part is an amazing idea indeed, especially when the paw prints are mentioned. Fantastic description of all the impressions throughout their journey.
| figlia del Dio chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
Oh, I love the last line. And it seems that I share your same enthusiasms as well :) Inspiring.
| albert12 chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
The ending reminds me of the poem "Footprints in the Sand".
| floppyearsthebunny chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
Brilliant Val! I love the last two lines. There splendid!
| Monkey chapter 1 . 5/11/2008
That was REALLY good. Expertly written, too. Im sure Petraverd would love this, Val. :) I need to read more of your fictions, I really do. Keep writing!
And Happy birthday to the Petra-fied uni if he reads this!