Reviews for One Dream to Change a Life
a chapter 4 . 9/27/2013
Oh fuck off with Malfoy. Way to ruin a perfectly good story.
beulah2013 chapter 5 . 5/27/2013
Awesome Harry!
Most stories I've read where he associates with Crabbe and Goyle it's not something he did but something he goes along with an after thought almost. But this one he takes the initiative! Go proactive!Harry!
beulah2013 chapter 3 . 5/27/2013
I would've thought that Hermione would've thought it a senseless and needlessly violent thing - the duel that is.
Lea chapter 5 . 12/2/2012
Hi,
Just wanted to say great story. Don't think I've ever seen this before, and I read a lot :).
Thanks for a good read.
ElizabethAnneSoph chapter 5 . 8/6/2012
Okay...
This is a new line of the story, I have never laughed so much over the first sorting of Harry! Blimey this is funny and I love that he just gives Dumbles what he deserves in death glares! I really look forward to more! I think it is very good that you have involved Gringotts and the goblins so much in this story!

My deepest compliments on your story
Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
It's an interesting start, but emancipation at age eight? Most have a minamum age of eleven. Just thought I'd point that out.
1529 chapter 5 . 5/5/2012
Is there a real reason that Harry is trying to do anything to be able to keep Draco around or is the author simply in love with redeemed!Draco? I mean, come on, Ron is thrown out on his ear for hinting that Draco and co could be evil, but Draco's abuse about Muggleborns is excused and then Harry invents a bunch of BS to make him accept Hermione while at the same time glossing over the fact that, while Slytherin isn't inherently evil, the fact is that the primary Death Eaters were the Slytherins of the past few generations and that the current occupants of the compartment share parentage with three of those individuals…

I can get redeeming Draco and all, but Harry isn't really doing that yet, instead he seems to be simply going along with Draco's prejudices by playing up to them. Harry also doesn't have a reason to be quite so abrupt with Ron (unless something happend that we are not aware of). So far this story seems to need a little more planning. If Harry is going to forgive insults and racial slurs then he should forgive all of them and give everyone the second chance, unless there is some reason that certain characters shouldn't get such, but as the reader is not aware of any such reason, it simply doesn't exist as far as the story is concerned.

This is a decent start to a story overall, but the obvious plot manipulations don't make any sense unless Harry is trying to pander to the followers of Voldemort, which, itself, makes no sense whatsoever...
1529 chapter 4 . 5/5/2012
There seemed to be a different standard used by Harry for Draco and co when compared to Ron... what Ron said was nothing that Draco hadn't said himself (except opposite), but Draco was warned and Ron was run off. Now I am no fan of Ron (or Ginny or Molly for that matter), but I fail to see the difference here...
1529 chapter 2 . 5/5/2012
A pretty good story so far, I did spot one thing that might need correcting.

'But what the hell am I going to do.' Two things, swearing like that at eight years old doesn't seem to be too realistic and that phrase is an interrogative, so a '?' should be used instead of the period. I think it's 10-20 paragraphs into the chapter.
bobcox26 chapter 5 . 5/4/2012
interesting and glad to see Ron put in his place more please
Monnbeam chapter 5 . 5/1/2012
I like this story and I hope you pick up on it again.
Aria Dragoncrest chapter 5 . 11/17/2011
Great story so far
monbade chapter 5 . 8/8/2011
interesting start. Any updates?
Catdays67 chapter 5 . 1/21/2011
love it
SeaSeraph chapter 5 . 12/4/2010
Interesting idea. Ive never read a plot before where Harry was raised by the goblins - I like it. But I think that your writing could use some work. This story reads very abrupt - almost like I was just skippig to the main parts of the story. You need to flesh it out a little bit - give some substance to the characters and the story. Right now it just feels like maybe an outline or something - no depth to it at all. Hopefully itll get a bit better as the story progresses. Good luck :)
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