|Reviews for McClane, Short and Unsweet|
| starfire25 chapter 5 . 2/6
interesting story. i like it a lot. oh no, what has the kid gotten himself into.
| Patrick chapter 5 . 5/12/2013
I hope you finish this. It's off to a great start. I tried to read this Die Hard story there, but the link was broken one way, and the other link went to a story that wasn't Die Hard. I read all the Harry Potter fic at your website, and was disappointed that some of the stories were unfinished.
| Mrs-N-Uzumaki chapter 2 . 1/17/2013
"I'm not moving in," Matt protested. "I mean, how gay would that be?"
"About as gay as living in another guy's basement," McClane pointed out.
I proper laughed out loud! You've got a great dynamic going between these two!
"Because we're kind of together but she said you were cool with it and I just realized that she never told you." GREAT line. I can totally picture this whole scene!
| Mrs-N-Uzumaki chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
Great start! Very in character :)
| USWeasilgirl chapter 5 . 3/17/2011
pfft hahahah! matt!
| Fan chapter 5 . 3/16/2011
OMG! I love this story! I couldn't stop reading it, and when the 'end' came I was sad! I want more chapters!
You captured everyones personalities perfectly! I could picture every scene happening as if I were watching a movie!
So do not, I repeat: DO NOT quit on this! I want to see this complete, and Matt whole.. hopefully ;D
So keep up this amazing work! I'll be watching you ;)
| Rika24 chapter 5 . 3/11/2011
glad to see you're updating. can't wait to see what happens next :)
| wandamarie chapter 5 . 3/11/2011
it is a good one thanks keep up the great work
| lnlune chapter 5 . 3/11/2011
Nice chapter. I'm eager to read the next one. Thanks for sharing.
| Gladoo89 chapter 5 . 3/11/2011
I agree with McClane, poor Matt indeed :D
| supergirl3684 chapter 5 . 3/11/2011
oh dear...if I were Matt, i'd crawl out the window but then again...nope, i'd just run! :D LOVED the chapter!
| weepingphoenix101 chapter 5 . 3/11/2011
Oh I am anxiously awaiting a military-style bootcamp scene here. Glad to see you updated! The scene between Lucy and McClane spoke to my heart, as I have an upcoming similar one due with my father. Thank you for the tidbits of dialogue which I might be stealing from you there :)
| Thistle of Liberty chapter 5 . 3/11/2011
This was really nice! And funny! :) Hope you continue it!
| sweettswetz chapter 5 . 3/11/2011
I read the whole thing again, its hilarious!
| achillies-eel chapter 5 . 3/11/2011
Oh my. Somehow I sense that, despite what McClane might say, that Matt is going to end up becoming his dog anyway. :D
Just read this again yesterday, and having an update today was a wonderful distraction from all the hell going on in my country. Thanks for writing! I think I might actually be able to sleep now.