Reviews for Mary Slew
Guest chapter 3 . 4/28/2014
oh, please write next chapters!
RebelAshRunner chapter 3 . 10/23/2012
Hey there! This story, oh boy, let me tell you I was scared out of my wits by how this was written. But hey, still a better love story than Twilight, and a better story than My Immortal (the worst story ever written in the history of ever). XD (No offense if you actually enjoy the films. The books were decent, but I digress.) This was pretty funny, and it made me smile, even though I'm currently bedridden with a concussion. So thank you, deary.
Kiki chapter 3 . 5/7/2012
Come back yo this someday. I love your Mary Sue!
Queen NekoChan chapter 3 . 4/7/2011
*sigh* Looking at the last time you updated, you probably dropped this story.
Queen NekoChan chapter 2 . 4/7/2011
Mary Slew is horrible. Absolutely horrible. I love this~
Queen NekoChan chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
AllThatGlitters13 chapter 3 . 12/31/2009
this was awesome , anyways update soon! :D
AllThatGlitters13 chapter 2 . 12/31/2009
this was really good! :P chapter 3 . 7/7/2009

The mary-sue-ness burns...

Well done, though XDD
Ondjage chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
I do resent how you actually believe all of these stereotypes about there actually being preppy, goths, and those types of labels in school. People are people. And that's that.

That aside, i liked your X-men Evolutions fics. lol
Ai Star chapter 3 . 9/4/2008
how can you get bored of it? it's funny! try not to give up -
EmilyRose-x chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
AnyaTheRhymer chapter 3 . 6/6/2008
LOL! Awesome!


P.S. xD
ShadowYashi chapter 2 . 5/17/2008
Haha! I love it XD. My favorite line in chapter 2 was...

A huge smile came across her face, her voice sounding seductive again, “Good to meet both of you.” Her perfect teeth glittered in the sun. “Darren Shan…sounds familiar. It sounds like an author or a book I read once. Huh…I don’t remember.”

Steve whispered to his friend as she stared up at the sky, her eyes an ocean like blue as she grew lost in thought, “She can read?”

Haha. Priceless.

I've gotten that feeling before, like you wanna just give up on the story completely? It's such a bother
Jayd Scarlett chapter 3 . 5/15/2008
aw, no, dont give up! i really liked this; I liked her 'little' secret, it DID make her a bit more Mary Slew-ish, which IS what you're writing
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