|Reviews for Where Witches Ride|
| snow eopard chapter 11 . 5/14/2013
OK I know this is a stupid question but isn't this supposed to be Bella and Jake not Jake and Cassie
| LadyLokiOfTardis chapter 10 . 5/9/2011
I'm sorry, but I don't like Bella. I'm not hating or anything, I just wanted to mention that I think that this story would have been better if it had been at least partially written in Cassie's POV
| mimi777 chapter 38 . 4/20/2011
Oh dear... So many emotions...
First off, congratulations on writing a very well-written story. Cassie's character was extremely endearing. I wanted to cry with her so many times when she was upset, because her reasoning made sense.
Second of all, and this might just be because my sister and I are very close like Bella and Cassie, but there were so many times when I thought Cassie had the right to flip out on Bella, and didn't. When she found out Bella planned on turning into a vampire, I would've been furious if I were Cassie. Instead, I felt like it was a little underplayed.
Skipping ahead to the end of the book, I can't say I'd be all understanding with Bella that she chose to save me instead of my daughter. Do I understand where Bella's coming from? Absolutely. But personally, I can't say I'd be all that "logical" if I were Cassie. Especially considering Cassie would've come back, eventually. Would it have been hard on Jake? Yes. But everyone could've been togther.
I guess all I'm saying is that I don't like Bella all that much (no matter who the author is, more often than not), and I wish it was just Cassie and Jake, but alas!
I'm sorry if it was too much complaining; I honestly really enjoyed your story. But I couldn't review with pointing that out. Otherwise, really enjoyable. Your writing style is very likeable, and a really good read. Can't wait to get started on the sequel!
| kaykayM chapter 35 . 1/3/2011
this is so.. captivating! i love it! i can't stop reading :P
looking forward to the sequels :D xxx
| word junky chapter 7 . 3/25/2010
I wish you han't made Tanya the enemy, I like Tanya and think shs had a bad wrap. Still the story is good, im still reading it so lots to go. Cheers
| Adrianna1120 chapter 38 . 2/10/2010
i love this story !
| MintCcIceCream chapter 20 . 12/24/2009
Ahaha! New York City! Center of the Universe!
I just really really had to say that, but I'll leave a more lengthy, thorough review when I finish the story! But so far I love it!
| sanchezkm chapter 16 . 9/6/2009
lol that bit with jake and cass was awesome until you put enrique eglesias lyrics in it!
| sanchezkm chapter 14 . 9/6/2009
You wrote her freak out really well, and I'm becoming more and more intrigued with Cass and her relationship with Bella.
“You should feel special, because even Bella had to." was really lovely
| sanchezkm chapter 8 . 9/6/2009
jesus at this rate Bella's going to forget how to use her own feet. I like Cassie but your Bella/Edward is a little weird and to similar to the way Meyer rights it for me to like it (ie, Bella constantly thinking Edward is too good for her, Edward being domineering and Bella not having a problem with it etc) I hope your Bella grows some balls :)
| MysticNyx06 chapter 33 . 7/30/2009
i love that even if B dies E just has to wait a few years to get her back... that's pretty f'in awesome.
| MysticNyx06 chapter 32 . 7/30/2009
YAY! I'M SO FREAKING HAPPY FOR THE ANGSTY GOODNESS *HAPPY DANCE*
| MysticNyx06 chapter 30 . 7/30/2009
| MysticNyx06 chapter 23 . 7/30/2009
so if witches never age then B could be a witch and still have her happily ever after for eternity with Edward! Ok, I know I'm getting my hopes up... and the fluffy goodness is starting to make me gag but I love this story. Think I'll link it on my twitter bc it needs more reviews! :D
| MysticNyx06 chapter 14 . 7/29/2009
“I don’t know! I DON’T KNOW I’m lost! I don’t know what to do! I’m disappearing and nothing makes any sense to me! NOTHING MAKES SENSE! I feel so tired! I’M OLD! MY SKIN IS ON FIRE! NOBODY KNOWS WHO I AM! I DON’T KNOW WHO I AM!”- Sounds like a quote from Eternal Sunshine...
"there’s nowhere you can be that isn’t where you’re meant to be"- beatles lyrics
And I still love the story btw.