Reviews for A Slightly Forgotten Fairytale
staceums chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
This was very well written; I really like it :)

Keep it up!
Luce chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
Hey, I like it... YAY something you wrote! [finally], I'm just confused because I don't know the characters, but overall, it's good.
Priestess of Groove chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
Ai yi yi. Too short. I'm not sure what to make of it, although am I right in guessing that this is a Balthier x Ashe story?

I most certainly cannot say your writing is bad, but it is a little clunky at times and I had a difficult time following, particularly while reading the passage from the book. I certainly got the gist of what you were saying, but I was losing my place and having to reread.

You've at the very least piqued my interest, and I am rather curious as to where you'll go with this.

Happy writing,

~PoG