Reviews for A Few Angry Words
Stratre chapter 61 . 9/12
better than that shit chapter that had e wanting to quit i liked it had some cliches but it was good i only found this cuz of your other story that look (waiting on that update bro eagerly love anko shes baby girl) worth the read
Stratre chapter 43 . 9/12
ifd i didnt read the godaned fucking reviews i would have quit right fuckin here an fuck man fuck that shit i woud kill the hokage and jiraya and hiashi and hinata and kiba and tsume all of them would fucking die 0.o
Guest chapter 43 . 9/11
The only reason I don't like this chapter is because the rebound guy for Hinata is always Kiba. I never liked Kiba
Guest chapter 43 . 9/11
I would have loved this chapter more if he learned the hiraishin by the deadline. That would really drive this chapter home.
The Lunatic Author chapter 32 . 9/7
No. Sasuke, down boy. Don't. Bad boy. Get back here. I don't think Kurama would like it.
Catbug chapter 1 . 8/18
Would've died if you somehow worked Gaara almost having a mental breakdown through all of this.
LadyTeldra chapter 12 . 8/18
I haven't even read the chapter yet, but when I saw your author note I burst into laughter. All I could think was that "Shikamaru is just too troublesome to kill." Unfortunately I really need to go to bed now... it is 5 in the morning...
OrionHax chapter 36 . 8/6
Well, shit.

That ain't good.
Onikai Yoko chapter 17 . 7/26
Just a note, the chūnin vest is actually brown or tan in Konoha. It's only green for tokujo and jōnin.
Anon chapter 61 . 7/26
For completing this story years ago, it certainly is wonderfully written. I had only came across this story due to the fact of somebody writing about critics united and I buried myself in the following links and you talked about 90% of people hated this fanfic and more were bad reviews but you kept them up due to free voice. I decided to look and I like many others hated the character description of Hinata using the seal. I was put off by both the 1st chapter & the description. Both of these things made me very unwilling to continue but hearing about it had my curiosity. I have finished this fanfic and may I say, I'm glad I didn't stop at the first chapter and pushed through because this was a nice use of my time. :)
Also why did Neji wear the pink kimono to the wedding?
Fox Sage Kinoe chapter 61 . 7/8
If you write a book that way I'll pay even more then $10. You don't write pages of useles details and the plot is pretty good. You can become an author and a famous one if you ask me.
RavenLilyLuna chapter 61 . 7/4
This was one of the most amazing stories I have ever read! I admit that I went through all the emotions while reading this. You are an extremely talented author and I look forward to reading your other works. Keep up your amazing work! :-) :-D
Bob chapter 44 . 7/4
You almost gave me a heart attack on chapter 43. I was about to rage quit.
dmt chapter 61 . 7/2
good story 7/10 gets a bit winded around chapter 37 though still well enjoyed
The Amol chapter 1 . 6/30
Just read the 1st chapter and I absolutely hated it.
You literally butchered Hinata's character. She would never ever use Cage Seal. That seal represents Branch family's slavery to Main.
Hinata is 100 times better person to low herself to such level.
Infact you just made her look shit fighter . Even if you made her 'win' the fight, she actually lost it . Real Hinata would have fought bravely even if she knew that she can't win . She is not a loser to resort such underhanded tactics.
And Naruto immediately asking for date . Yeah because that totally feel like believable development.
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