Reviews for A Few Angry Words
Gold Testament chapter 18 . 6/9
*Sigh* Neji was the fool that day as Hinata was the only person in the Hyuuga clan who cared about him and was on his side.
Gold Testament chapter 15 . 6/9
Wonderful twist with Minato. Some have actually just let him be manipulated by Orochimaru.
Gold Testament chapter 14 . 6/9
Gamabunta is a toad not a frog.
Gold Testament chapter 9 . 6/9
Oh if Ebisu finds out he will kick Jiraiya's ass for that.
Tobee chapter 1 . 6/9
Always thought Hinata should have used the seal to beat Neji, this is interesting and smart!
corbinskydragon1 chapter 61 . 6/6
Damn what an awesome story. You almost had me with AU chapter because I was so sucked in not even paying attention. Thanks for the great read!
Guest chapter 60 . 6/2
malikmi95 chapter 61 . 5/29
worth a doujin
Indo-Naruto chapter 61 . 5/29
best fanfic ever, i hope it ended where naruto have a children hehe :)
ZirconK chapter 61 . 5/18
Story was overall a great one must admit but seriously your omakes sure were rude!
Overall love the whole story.
Some guy chapter 21 . 5/16
Chapter 21 was good. The only problem I had was the fact that you wrote "frogs" instead of toads. As we all know that Jiraiya is known as the Toad Sage.
Guest chapter 61 . 5/15
Best. Story. Ever. My mind was like totally blown! This is one of the best stories I have ever read!
Guest chapter 61 . 5/11
Doste doste
jcampbellohten chapter 61 . 5/5
Yay, happy ending! Also, I did NOT see Tayuya's reveal coming last chapter. I remember thinking it was hilarious when she got put on Team Kakashi.

The Naruto x Hinata romance stuff was usually pretty cheesy, but that was fine because at least they weren't having relationship hurt/comfort or angst. I thought it was kind of outrageous to see Hinata being so incredibly domestic, though (mostly the "cooking him dinner every night" part), at least before I got used to it. I don't remember how it was at the beginning, but at some point I noticed your grammar is great - there are some grammatical errors I get hung up on when reading and it was a relief not to deal with them here. Speaking of which, however, there was one thing I was amused/annoyed by: you should only put commas before quotes at the beginning of a line of dialogue, not when it's just a word or phrase in quotation marks. Also, some infrequent spelling errors; e.g., at the end of Ch. 59 Ayame calls her fiancé "Irukua"-kun, and in this chapter it says Hinata has a look of bliss "ion" her face.
jcampbellohten chapter 60 . 5/5
BAMF Naruto ftw!
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