|Reviews for A Few Angry Words|
| Wateranddarkness666 chapter 6 . 5/18/2008
It's cool to see Naruto actually getting really good training. And it's interesting that he's a wind type. :) Keep up the great work. :D
| Monkey Ninja Naf S'netog chapter 6 . 5/18/2008
Maybe that little talk will put Kakashi back on track. It is indeed sad how he barely instructed his students at all.
| dadude chapter 6 . 5/18/2008
cool, sounds like ebisu might actually give naruto a fighting chance, well against hinata it might be kind of weird, but if he fights others u know like gaara, or sasugay, u should have him teach him the secrets of kage bunshin, will naruto ever meet pervy sage?, anyways nice chapter, u should have had the hokage make kakashi choose, ur students or icha icha, that would have been a though choice, anyways update soon
| the16thday chapter 6 . 5/18/2008
Good chapter, I like how Kakashi got a lecture from the Hokage, when I think about it he is a pretty crappy teacher. Hopefully Kakashi gets a second chance and starts actually TEACHING them. Oh and please don't give Naruto too many powerful jutsu too early, I would say him learning two B or A class wind jutsu in three weeks sound about right three if ones a C class or lower. He shouldn't learn anything about low A class until he's mid to high tier chunin. Also remember that Naruto is a close to mid range fighter so have him learn taijutsu enhancing and mid-range wind jutsu to fit his fighting style something akin to Asuma's trench knives.
| random reviewer chapter 6 . 5/18/2008
Interesting story line you came up with! I like it! Because now Naruto is more varied in power as he should have been in the manga. Seriously, not knowing elemental chakra till Part 2?
Anyways, I also like how you're putting Kakashi on the hot seat. He's definitely lax if he has to rely on Ebisu and Jiraiya to teach Naruto. The other teachers seemed ok prepping their singular students while still taking care of the entire team.
| taintedlegacy chapter 6 . 5/18/2008
Can't wait to see how the rest of Naruto's training goes. Keep up the good work and update soon!
| Monkey Ninja Naf S'netog chapter 5 . 5/18/2008
At least Hinata managed not ot faint until Naruto was out of sight...
| Monkey Ninja Naf S'netog chapter 4 . 5/18/2008
Spies! Those two nosy...
I wonder how it will go! Must... watch...
| Monkey Ninja Naf S'netog chapter 3 . 5/18/2008
Hm... Training with Jiraiya, or with Ebisu?
I wonder how far this story is going to go... I don't want it to end :'(
| Monkey Ninja Naf S'netog chapter 2 . 5/18/2008
Wow... Hinata vs Naruto?
Hm... interesting. I wonder how this will play out.
| Monkey Ninja Naf S'netog chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
Owned. Neji got so OWNED!
Finally glad to see someone do that. Hinata didn't suddenly gain powers she never had. She did exactly the thing that would let her win, ad I've never seen this happen before in a fanfic.
| Reimu-San chapter 2 . 5/18/2008
Oh yea, just a short comment about the whole popular reception thin g that you mentioned in the author's note of this chapter: i feel the same that even sometimes you simply just don't know what people will like and it's often very different from your own opinions of your own work. I've had similar experiences with art.
Your other story, "A Mother's Love" is a very good story, but I haven't read through all of it. If I get the chance, I would like to read finish that story and the other one you mentioned in your author's note (the one you consider your best work) and compare. (Sorry...kinda off topic for a review)
Er, also, I notice you write very fast... This story has been only published for maybe 4-5 days? It first came out on May 12th. O.o Wow, that's really great how you can write so much in such a short period amount time.
Yea, sorry to be so off topic all the time, but one last comment that's actually on topic: I like your writing style and your short and easy to read paragraphs in this story. Your descriptions are clear and easy to understand. Also, the way you portray the characters are very entertaining. I especially like the very sophisticated diction that Shino has in this story (oops it's in a later chapter, but I'm just commenting on the story over all...gr should've put this in the other review...dam it XD) and well, even though Shino doesn't speak like that in the original series, it was quite creative of you! Once again, good job and keep up the good work!
| Reimu-San chapter 5 . 5/18/2008
Interesting start and change of the original story line. I like the whole idea of Naruto and Hianta still having to fight each other. I assume you could've easily changed that too, but I'm glad you kept it that way.
The date was interesting, I wish there were a little bit more description of what was going on during the date though, or if the date was extended.
I think this story has potential! Good work and keep it up!
| Adelaide 'Adell' Peirce chapter 5 . 5/17/2008
LOL Nice. Cant wait to see their fight
| TMEMEME chapter 5 . 5/17/2008
WOW! this is GREAT! I really like this story line, and its believeable. EVEN BETTER! Keep it up. Oh, and, DEATH TO ALL JINCHUURIKI! Oh, uh, wait, you weren't supposed to here that...