|Reviews for I Must Hurt You|
| ScatterdParchment chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
Oh my gosh...no lie, I'm crying right now. This was AMAZING! COuld you maybe continue this? Like, what happens next in his life all the way up to when he decides to got to Volterra?
| Tuggummi chapter 1 . 5/14/2008
Oh my god! that is so sad :( But really good writing, as always!
| marbleenchantress chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
Great job! U should write one about wat edward does when he talks to bella and where he goes after ... just a suggestion of course bravo
| Life goes on without you chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
I'm sad. Not only was this a one shot, which by the way shouldn't be, but Edward the pain that was expressed was heartbreaking.
| xXxElianexXx chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
AWW! So good- best yet! Really good writing. Can you please read and review my story The End For Edward- it's the chapter 'the End' in NM and it's similar to this. Brilliant writing, believable characters- well done! x
| Miranda chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
I literally cried, dude. that was so sad that I just sat in my chair trembling for a second before I could move my hands again. but that's a good thing- it means your an awesome writer:)
| Oxygen.and.Cucumber chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
Great insight, another amazing story!
| NoNameUser chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
That was... so sad. I think I nearly cried. Why? Please continue; this is one of the best stories I've read in a long time. You do a very good job at portraying all the characters' emotions, and things like that. I think it you continued Edwards POV throughout New Moon, it would be an excellent story. :)
| jesslikescoffee chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
So sad! But extremely well-written! I can definitely see this happening.
| Im-jelouse-of-bella chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
You always write amazingly! Your one of my favorite authors!
| winryrockbell2 chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
That was a great story. You're right, it was sad, but it must be written, right? You're a great author and thanks for writing all these amazing stories!
| all time low high chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
omgosh! is it possible for u to write a bad story? urs are all too good. well i still love that. keep writing. ur oneshots are fabulous. i reviewed. now, du u love me? lolz. jk
| meg-poo chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
that was soo AMAZING!
i would love you if you wrote more.
i think you could make it work!
| caww chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
Well that will always be painful.
| hot 101 chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
Oh gosh! that was just-depressing!.I mean I know it had to be like this, I mean I'm pretty sure if Stephenie Meyer wrote New Moon in Edward's POV this is what it would be like but gosh!.Sorry, that probably sounded like a flame or something but it wasn't!.I actually thought it was pretty amazing! but of course everything you write is always amazing!.But I was actually stunned with this one, I mean Edward is so deep and his character isn't exactly the the most simple one to write, but you did it fantasticly!.I really think you could write the whole book of New Moon in Edward's POV!.I mean you already have the first chapter and everything!.I havn't read any good takes of New Moon in Edward's POV (whice dosn't mean there isn't a good one out there...) and I think you would do wonderfully at it! actually, after reading alot of your work, I'm SURE you would do wonderfully at it!.