|Reviews for I Must Hurt You|
| NightShade Tears chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
SO UNBELIEVABLY CUTE!
I think you have portrayed Edward's mind excellently. Have you read mine? It's Edward's thoughts when he knows Bella's "dead" and he goes to Volterra...
| rockin roxxy chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
That was AWESOME writing, you had me in tears!
| Browneyedbella347 chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
Oh. My God. You just made me cry! I actually started crying because of that story! It was really good, but soo sad! Edward, why!
Okay, I really did like that, even though it was depressing. Hmm... I need something happy now. Heey... runaway xo... happiness? Feeling the inspiration? :)
Wonderful story, I hope to see more soon!
| 765876587658 chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
Oh my GOD! You wrote this so well! Amazing! It's so passionate and so beautifully sad. Fantastic! You are extremely good at sad things! You should do more! I LOVED IT! Great, great job!
rain is my refuge
| edwardcullansbuffy chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
great 1 shot
| SycoSiren chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
i cried i really did i iked it sad bt i liked it
| OutSideIn chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
That was really, really, really good! I started cryin gat teh end!
| Kuro Garyuu chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
Not your normal writing, but great writing all the same! I loved it! I was so close to tears...I don't like seeing Edward sad... :(
| brittybee93 chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
ahh! that's so good! it made me so sad :(
| dancing.rox464 chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
I liked that one too! I love how you can tell which character thinks which thought at the beginning! That is so cool!
| paper.creations chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
Oh my gosh... I love it! It's amazing!
Seriously, you are the best.
It was wonderful!
It seems like no matter what you write, you write it well!
| Livy Alice chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
| Beatlemaniac1 chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
It was a very detailed and emotional one-shot. I like how well you kept them all in character, but of course, this applies to all your great stories :) I loved it; keep on writing!
| xo-annaelizabeth-xo chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
that was really really good.
You did very well although as you said: yoou were out of your element.
I think you captured the scene well.
Only thing is I don't totaly understand Emmett.
maybe some of his thougths should have been in the story.
Then again if YOU werent' sure what his reaction is, you did a good job of evading it. :D
| Angie-ange chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
wow its cool. i think you really capture the whole thing about edward's stuggle to leave bella in new moon. anywyas i like it