Reviews for Harry Potter and the Difference of Time
Redery chapter 46 . 9/30
Ugh can't believe ron is still around lol.

Ha, take that James Potter!
Redery chapter 45 . 9/30
Damn this Voldemort works fast
Redery chapter 44 . 9/30
Nice he can take two more killing curses lol.

Good chapter, explains why Voldy attacked.

Don't agree with him telling them he's from the future, but at this point they can't really do much about it so no biggie.
Redery chapter 43 . 9/30
Freaking awesome chapter.
Hogwarts power is op lol. This was a good victory, took out the dementors at least one death eater and Voldy won't be using the snakes again. Surprised he decided to attack Hogwarts so suddenly while Dumbles is still there as well as Harry.
Redery chapter 42 . 9/30
Nice chapter.
Why now though? Wasn't he keeping them to destroy all at once?
Redery chapter 41 . 9/30
Finally he should've told Hermione ages ago.
Redery chapter 40 . 9/30
That was freaking awesome lol. First time seeing Dumbles get Oblivated.

Having a portable basilisk would be helpful.
Redery chapter 39 . 9/30
So much drama for no reason. Hurting Voldemort is incomparable to hurting anyone else. The man is a cold blooded murderer and freaking insane. He's NOT human anymore despite how much he might squeal like one when hurt. Humanity isn;t just physical, and he;s abandoned his long ago.
Redery chapter 38 . 9/30
Aww is Snape jelly?
Redery chapter 37 . 9/30
Nice ending
Redery chapter 36 . 9/30
Always irked me that he left the entire school know about the RoR. It's prehaps hogwarts most precious secret. The things one can do there are practically unlimitied. I mean if he hadn't, Draco would've never got the death eaters inside. I know in this AU there's two basilisks, but in canon, he should've brought them down to the CoS. It would've given away the location, but that's meaningless since he's the only one with the key

Woot, rescue mission
English Major chapter 17 . 9/30
You have some truly excellent ideas and some unique plot twists that I really enjoyed. However, your English skills need some severe attention. One cat: cat. More than one cat: cats (NOT cat's). One Potter: Potter. More than one Potter: Potters (NOT Potter's). There are no apostrophes in pluralizations. This is Primary School English you need to review. Belonging to one Potter: Potter's. Belonging to more than one Potter: Potters' (or Potters's). The possessive requires an apostrophe.

You really need to look up the definitions of your and you're. They are not the same. Neither are they interchangeable. You have consistently used them incorrectly. Also often misused are there/their/they're. Your readability could be vastly improved by paying more attention to ensuring you have selected the correct word.

Keep writing. You can only improve if you know what you are doing wrong. Thank you for your contribution to the world of Harry Potter Fan Fiction.
Redery chapter 35 . 9/29
Should've oblivated him when he had the chance lol.

And thank god get rid of Ron once and for all for crying out loud. Throw him in front of an AK even, give him a heros farewell, whatever, just drop the deadweight.
Redery chapter 34 . 9/29
Wondering if he's hallucinating or not.
Redery chapter 33 . 9/29
Lol best chapter yet.
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