THIS STORY WAS AWESOME! THANK YOU!

Wow, just, WOW! One of the better epic-length AU's out there, even with the 'english as a second language' misspellings and grammar mistakes (there, their, & they're most notably.).

BTW, People, when in doubt, put the word into GOOGLE or BING or ANY SEARCH ENGINE to check on spelling and/or meaning! The UGLINESS of near UNDECIPHERABLE prose and a demonstrable lack of motivation to check for readability does a terrible disservice to both the story and the reader for all the originality of the offering. To wit: YOUR READERS CANNOT *MARVEL* AT YOUR TALENT IF THEY CAN'T FIGURE OUT WHAT YOU'RE TRYING TO SAY! I don't think you realize that it requires a greater degree of intelligence to decipher the poor writer's work and; therefore, will LOSE YOU READERS of lesser reading skills who, unfortunately, represent the growing majority of print consumers - even as the overall consumer pool shrinks!

Man, what an intense story! I'm actually a little glad the original one was less dark than this one, I'm not sure if I could have taken that. Your idea for Protectors of Hogwarts is great, and the way you incorporated and expanded the prophecy was as good as I've ever seen. I'm not so much for the cutting in the story, but I can understand it, having written an attempted suicide oneshot myself. The tumor was a great idea as well. There were some spelling errors in the latest chapters, but nothing I couldn't deal with. I must say your philosopher's stone idea was sheer brilliance and I can't believe I've never read something similar before. Genius, I tell you.

Excellent story. Thank you.

Just have to say that you're story was amazing! It really was believable since the characters weren't so OOC, which I liked. Loved the whole father-son relationship between Harry and Severus :)
-thank you!

Loved your story! Finally a fresh view on the whole 'redo' idea. You made it sound believable and I''m glad there was no bashing. Your style of writing is really good and your characters were very strong. You just have to do something about your grammar. All in all, you're a great writer!

this is probably one of the best stories i have read on fanfiction.
It shows that Harry isnt allmighty and super powerfull. Hes just a little above average.
I love your dialogues.
The relationship between Harry and Snape is awesome too..
Brilliant story!
YMP

This was an interesting story :) THanks for writing!

Intersting.

Apologies for not leaving a review beforehand. Enjoying the story so far.

I just finished this delightfully long, intricate, complex story... and truly loved it. I love the depth of the plot, and the slight twist to the characters. Well done! Heading off to read more.

Awesome. Just...amazing.

Really, this is enough. If I had one more time read how tear ran down Harry's cheek I threw up. Shouldn't Harry be at least a little balanced? I really hate this whiny Harry... Well, if someone like read this bullshit then do it.

(I apologize for any mistakes. English isn't my native language.)

poor dumbledore, he doesn't even know why he's being avoided...

Hi there! I have to thank you for writing this piece because it's kept me company on my train rides to and from work for a couple of weeks. This made my otherwise *torturing* journey bearable. I usually shun fanfics that portray Snape in such light - I prefer his snarky side but I suppose I've made an exception for this piece because the whole idea of Harry rewinding time and doing things differently is so exciting! It's great that my fav, Sirius *did not* die in this version - and I think given that how you've summarised seven books into 54 chapters, some rushed portions are to be expected. Unless you've decided to write 7 books... (ha!).

I haven't been reading Harry Potter much lately so what images I have of Rowling's characters could have faded already... I get the feeling that some characters are a wee bit OOC at certain points, though this could all be explained with this story being set in an alternate timeline. Like, Sirius calling Harry pup. I mean, they may have acted differently as their experiences aren't the same as canon.

Nevertheless, this is a wonderful fanfic and I enjoyed all 54 chapters. Thank you for this experience :)