Reviews for Symphony
KidTantei chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
I actually like the story. However, this story could belong to any fandom with a girl with wavy hazel brown hair. I'm assuming the two characters are Natsume and Mikan. If you really wanted to write about them, perhaps you could have described Natsume, or stayed more true to his canon character. You could have mentioned somewhere his looks, or that he rarely smiles. He smiled quite a bit in this story. If you won't mention names, you have to mention particular traits, so that readers can easily know who they are. Right now, these two characters could be anyone.

I do like how you write, though. Keep writing! :)
Shiro-Tenshi563 chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
I can't b bothered signing in. It was great, just very short.
ShhListen chapter 1 . 8/10/2008


are you sure that this is even gakuen alice

ohh well

it was really good anyway...
Leafless chapter 1 . 6/21/2008 cute..i really love how the story goes..its short,yet its great..keep it up..
StarAngel02 chapter 1 . 5/24/2008
nice :)
iris chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
Short and to go!Keep writing
Shiro-Kitsune8 chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
Simple but sweet! I like it!
tokyobend17 chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
Aww. xD

This is so kawaii! w

Yeah, I know how it feels when there are so many hits...

but reviews? o_o

Good job! D

I salute you~!

More power! :)

- a.S.