Reviews for Buggy Trouble
mille libri chapter 1 . 1/28/2017
I liked this a lot - clever and entertaining and Kaidan's internal voice is spot-on.
MayContainHyjinks chapter 1 . 6/10/2016
Dear Author

That was awesome! You had me rolling on the floor at the end. Hahahahahaha poor Kaiden.

Thanks for the story
Angela chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
This is too good. Love it! :]
Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
lol poor Kaiden Damn fly!
writtenrhythm chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
Poor Kaidan! My Shep would have cracked up laughing, probably leaving him even more embarrassed. I loved the last line, too!

If you ever do a multi-chapter fanfiction, you should let me know. I'd totally read it!
Lossefalme chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
*claps enthusiastically*

Very nicely done! A cute, fun one shot that was both entertaining and well written. I like the concept of a fly on the Normandy, and giggled imagining Kaidan going after it and trying to catch it. Great job! :D
Talyn chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
*smirks* Nicely done. Hope the lieutenant has better luck keeping it caught next time.
Juna Maleus chapter 1 . 6/3/2008
LOL. Very funny, and a very descriptive piece.
Arae Arca chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
LOL, loved it! Especially the last bit.


"Go to hell."'

pathopoeia chapter 1 . 5/17/2008
Fabulous! A good read for some light hearted humour I love the ending especially:

Maybe he had imagined the whole thing…

Maybe he really did need the extra sleep…

Maybe —


“Go to hell.”

Well written, I love it!
glassthroat chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
Aw, poor Kaidan. XD That was great, though! More, I say! More!
Fegli chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
lol I DID like it. Very cute, and kind of touching, at the same time. "She used to pay him a quarter for every little insect he smacked with the old plastic fly swatter."
Parle chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
That's hilarious. Kaidan and the fly. The entire fic pretty much concentrated on that crazy fly. Should be a pairing: Kaidan/fly.
sinvraal chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
I really liked this, light and funny without being silly. Good stuff.

I'm new fanfic too, welcome! It's a great sandbox to play in.
Nvrmore chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
Ha ha ha. That was cute. Poor Alenko. :)
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