|Reviews for Canaveral|
| Freya922 chapter 17 . 10/20/2013
Thanks for this - such great stories, both of them. Very touching yet full of humor, too. Bravo!
| Freya922 chapter 15 . 10/20/2013
OMG, the 'bear' eviscerating Dean just about killed me. Has anyone ever tried harder to soldier on while caring for others than Dean? And gotten misunderstood and left behind more often? Not very fond of John right now.
| Freya922 chapter 12 . 10/20/2013
Here in chapter 12 I'm feeling so distraught for the misunderstandings between the boys during the Stanford years. You highlight this so poignantly. Poor Dean, especially, with these terrible injuries and no one there for him. :( And Sam coming to realize that his was going on!
| Freya922 chapter 1 . 10/17/2013
You've done it again - made me laugh so hard I'm disturbing the other patrons at Starbucks. You really have a gift for describing these Winchester family situations...funny with a tinge of sad underneath. Beautiful.
| SuperVikinggirl chapter 17 . 8/1/2013
Really Great story! I really enjoyed it! Thanks so much
| steepedinwords chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
I LOVE your internal-Dean voice. Just spot on pitch perfect. Gosh.
| si chapter 2 . 7/29/2012
XXII ch'p 1/04 K,FL
LOLing forever. :)
| ccase13 chapter 17 . 3/10/2012
This really is a truely great story and I'm not surprised to read that it won awards. This is the second time I've read it and I'm finally remembering to put you on permanent author alert and leave a comment.
This is such a great picture of how Dean and Sam might have lost contact for 2 years after Dean went against JOhn's disowning of Sammy when he first left for Stanford.
| skacetykey chapter 17 . 9/3/2011
Another fine myth from PADavis. Good use of setting and explanation of how and why a skunk ape would be dangerous, plus her well-done hurt/comfort. The descriptions of the Uktena and Dean's claustrophobia in the cave are good spots.
| Anise Nadiah chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
I really love this story. Thanks so much for such a great story. I really love how you include other people into a connection with dean. This fic is truly are my fav. Heck! all your fic are my fav actually. I'm sorry i did not review sooner. You are my fav author for SPN fanfic ever.
| borgmama1of5 chapter 17 . 11/1/2010
Just found this via a rec the other day, and it is awesome!
I hurt so bad for Dean...I felt you did a great job with all the family dynamics, Dean aware of his Dad's nature, trying to behave so his dad would want to have Dean with him...John being tough and harsh, but there was still an element that indicated he loved his sons.
And Sam was amazingly written, the awareness of the distance between him and Dean now, his realization that he hurt Dean while at Stanford and yet also acknowledging that he didn't think he could have handled it differently...Such realistic ambivalence among all of them.
And the doctor, Jill, was a fabulous character.
I really enjoyed this story!
| Brightshadow-chi chapter 17 . 8/31/2010
I really liked to see Sam taking on Dean though ;)
| Death-Muncher chapter 17 . 3/31/2010
Yet another solid story. Excellent job once again. :)
| Rosetta Brunestud chapter 17 . 2/20/2010
Great fic *-*
I really liked it I kept my eyes glued to the story until the end ehehe I couldn't stop reading it )
Kisses and see ya next o/
| bhoney chapter 17 . 12/21/2009
Sorry it took me so long to get back to review this chapter. Life's been crazy.
This made me laugh: "Dean was positive that not even Florida could outmojo Jill." I liked Jill, a lot, and for someone who normally avoids OFCs like the plague, that's saying a lot.
This made me sad: "But I was calling you maybe two or three times a month for two years – and no matter when I called, you never picked up, not once, until I called from the hospital phone and you didn’t recognize the number...But he’d been relieved that Dean hadn’t called back, God forgive him, relieved." And it made me sad that Sam thought John was probably right, about making a clean break. I'm glad he felt bad, but I wanted more, somehow. And I was still mad at John, especially when we find out he did punish Dean by making him dig the Panama Canal. I'd like to have seen Sam holler at John for leaving Dean in the hospital, for erasing his messages. I want some resolution for that. I love John, but I want his butt kicked for how he acted in this story.
I'm glad you ended this on a brotherly note, the boys bickering and bantering. That's always a pleasure to read.
All in all, a very well-done story. Suspenseful, emotionally compelling, lots of great action and some nice OCs. I liked the part where Sam and Dean spent time with Jill and her family, it's nice for them to have allies they don't have to lie to about what they do. Nice job on this!