Reviews for How I Wish
Krystal Jaymes chapter 12 . 10/17/2011
This is a very decent story, but I just have a few suggestions.

1. As usual with many FF authors, grammar can always be improved.

2. Make your chapters longer! :)

3. Paragraphs help some, don't just skip lines. :)

But you are a fabulous writer, dahhhhling. :D Keep going!
Angeldolphin01 chapter 12 . 8/19/2010
I love it. I want more.
IOnlyDateEmpaths chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
Ohmigod its The Spill Canvas! I AM IN FUCKING LOVE WITH THE SPILL CANVAS! I CAN NOT EXPRESS MY LOVE THROUGH EXCLAMATION MARKS! This Is For Keeps is a slightly cliched song though, dont you think?
Southern-Dreamer-Babe chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
ill take the purple elephants plz! lol gr8 story so far!
DisneyVampire chapter 12 . 6/25/2009
As a first story, this has real potential. I say that because I see places where you could fill in more detail and give us a broader picture.

Overall the story is good. I was especially pleased that you can spell. It is sad to read some of the stories here and the writers either can't or won't use spellcheck if they have spelling issues. Spelling issues make me cringe because they take away from the writing. But, happily, you don't have that problem as I have seen in other writer's stories.

The only thing I could tell you: Get a good Thesaurus. Use words you would not normally use instead of the same ones everyone uses. Be original! You have a wonderful imagination and a good knack at writing, but fill in more. Make us "see" what you are writing about.

I think you are a good writer and I really lok forward to reading more of your stories.

Disney Vampire
suntitan chapter 12 . 6/8/2009
I would have reviewed for you had I read it sooner!

I loved it, do you have more?
Annabella1901lover chapter 12 . 3/27/2009
i dont know...they could do the nasty in someone elses hotelrom an have woevers room it is walk in in the middle of it...lol...love it...keep righting..lol i cat spell worth shit...
intensewhatever chapter 12 . 3/26/2009
I really liked the story! It's a shame it's over...Oh well! I loved it! Great job! Update those oneshots!
iluvedward4ever chapter 12 . 3/24/2009
AH CELINE THAT WAS AWESOME LOL!

OK

BUT DOD I HAVENT TALKED TO YOU IN FOREVER GET ON AIM MORE!

OKAY...

TALK TO YOU LATER...

AND UPDATE SON! :)
asf134 chapter 12 . 3/23/2009
OH MY FU*CKIN GAWD! IT'S OVER!
xoxocullenluverxoxo chapter 12 . 3/23/2009
o hot damn...
barbiedoll123 chapter 12 . 3/23/2009
thats a real good ending
kiriny13 chapter 12 . 3/22/2009
Oh.. my... God. So freaking hot and sexy when Edward is so.. animalistic. I love it! Amazing!
Scary.Jibberish chapter 11 . 3/5/2009
*scoff* you stopped it THERE? but that chapter was so short! you sadist lol
Scary.Jibberish chapter 8 . 3/5/2009
YAY! WEDDINGS! *CLAPPING AND JUMPING UP AND DOWN* I LOVE WEDDINGS!
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