|Reviews for Dawn Twilight|
| SarannWrapp chapter 20 . 12/20/2012
I don't know if you are still active on but I wanted to thank you for sharing your delightful story. It was a very enjoyable read. May your pen be ever fruitful.
| A-Nony-Mouse chapter 20 . 6/12/2012
That was a brilliant story. You seamlessly wove in characters whose storys hadn't been completed and added new characters as was needed. Moira was a believable character in that she wasn't sure about everything, didn't learn Sidarin in three minutes and started out by stalking teachers. You also gave her a believable bloodline and the ending, while a little bittersweet was satisfying. It was an amazing story so thankyou.
| Lady Laurelin Ancalimon chapter 6 . 7/15/2009
You keep comparing places to heaven and hell... I wonder if there is a reason behind that?
| Lady Laurelin Ancalimon chapter 3 . 7/15/2009
How would she have known how to spell it if she did know what Edhel meant?
| Hail To King Joffey chapter 20 . 5/19/2009
This story is so unique, i love it! I think this is the...third time ive read it and still not over it. Kudos for a great read :)
| jada951 chapter 20 . 10/8/2008
Wow! unless I am mistaken, I remember reading part of this a long time ago, but it stopped w/ Durin's Bane on the mtn. So glad to see you finished!
A bit confusing in a few places, but wonderful!
Thanks for sharing.
| HeartBreakerWithAHeartofGold chapter 20 . 7/5/2008
I just spent the past seven something hours reading Dawn Twilight and I must say, I am incredibly impressed. I expected some run of the mill, quick entertainment story and instead received a well written, unique gem of fiction.
The story was quite original and you brought Tolkien's universe alive in all aspects. The transition of the old beings into the future was smooth and very "real," in a sense. It tied together much history of Middle Earth and not just the Lord of The Rings trilogy.
And among the entire drama of the events in the story, you always managed to add the best amount of humor: dwarves dressed in Nascar memorabilia and overalls, perverted elves.
A truly inspiring piece of work.
| asdfjkl chapter 20 . 6/28/2008
a good story. a few of your characters need beefing out and you probably should expand the moira/greg relationship, the climax, and the epilogue. you hinted at a bunch of stuff, but never really followed through, and then you didn't hint at stuff and suddenly things started happening without preparation. is greg mortal?
anyway, great plot line even if it wasn't very tight. i like moira-she've funny-and your legolas plotline was perfect.
| DLazyBat chapter 20 . 6/16/2008
Great story! I believe your story might be the only " elves that were left behind" story that I like on here. You did a wonderful job making the whole thing believable and keeping the characters in character through out. And for once the main character wasn't trying to get hooked up to Legolas! Again a wonderful job and I look forward to reading more of your work!
| Saeyre chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
Your originality, skill, and style are amazing! I loved this story tons, brilliant how it builds from innocuous beginnings to some lovely thrilling climaxes
| alfalfa7 chapter 20 . 6/11/2008
That was amazing. I look forward to more of your stories.
Until next time,
| Telcontar Rulz chapter 20 . 6/11/2008
Aw. Nice happy ending. And Birdsong on instant messaging is a funny image. Thanks for an interesting read.
| Jasper's Little Psychic chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
I really love that last line. ITs a good story so far. I still absolutely love that last line!11
| Luthien and Tari Oronar chapter 20 . 6/11/2008
Ok, this whole chapter was pretty darn-tootin sad [bittersweet] but this line left me doing all I could to keep from bawling!:
"He had a ton of reasons for going West and just one reason to
stay here. And even Moira wasn’t sure she was worth all that."
...I'm such a girl!
Good ending though, and I'm so glad that Greg stayed with Moira!
| potterfan2006 chapter 20 . 6/11/2008
This was a great chapter..and an all together great story..i just cant beleave that it is over..it was still a very good ending..and i am glad that it was a long chapter..there was so much that you had to wrap up and i am glad that you did that..hope you wite more stories soon.