|Reviews for Atlas|
| echoing noise chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
that was really good! I was just thinking, "Hey- atlas. that's a good name for a Harry Potter fic." so i searched it, and this came up! And it's exactly what I hoped for! Anyway, I loved it, it was very put togethor and not too wordy. Nice job.
| AsianTwinkiesFTW chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
Damn straight Harry. You tell 'em.
| Avindara Nirvene chapter 1 . 5/14/2008
| skywalker05 chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
Good. Harry-as-hero is compelling, and, as in the other story I reviewed, you carry the metaphor through well and add to it. If I had any question about it being stale, the bit about Atlas crying dispersed it. I do think that this fic could have been a bit more powerful and less whiny (more heroic) if you ended at "Now it's your turn.", but I realize that's personal preference. I really liked the twist, the grounding, in the line "Atlas had the sky on his shoulders; I have only the fate of my world. If I fall, if I falter, the sky will remain far above us, but the ground will drop out from beneath our feet."
P.S. I left you a review for a Star Wars story and said you used "an adjective as a verb"-I definitly meant 'as a noun', sorry. :)